 WastedYouth98 2009-11-24 . chapter 16Oh my gosh is she okay!! She is totally right she definitely doesn't need Ralph ever, but i guess Xander might. |
 ElephantTheory 2009-11-24 . chapter 16 Yay updates!! :) :)
aww don't be sorry for having loads on, isn't your fault
loved this chapter, I forgot how much I liked this fic!
Looking forward to more chapters :)
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 Narnel 2009-11-24 . chapter 16You updated!! And with a really long chapter!!
:D *happy dance* well that made my week :)
Poor Jenny :( She should just tell him about Ralph, he'd understand... plus, then they'd both want to get rid of Ralph, which would be good for everyone...
Also, oh! at the (twist?) at the end where Xander sees where she is... what could it mean!?
Now I'm all excited to find out, and you might not update for ages... :(
Aw well, don't feel too bad, I know how it is, I've got gcse exams atm so I feel your workload-related pain.
Ah well, great chapter (as always ;) ), have a good thanksgiving and christmas!!
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 KissTheLibrarian 2009-11-04 . chapter 15hey :)
I thought I should write you a review, because I do this far to little and your gorgeous fanfiction really deserves being reviewed!
on the one hand I hate Ralph for kissing Jenny but on the other hand I pity him...
he is a really well invented character, but somehow he reminds me of Olivia and thats why I don't like him... :D
I loved that part with the demon heart, it was gripping and interesting ;)
but I have to admit I cried whenn Lucy died :'(
I really like Xander in your fanfiction :D the phone conversation between him and Jenny made me laugh myself to death :D
but most of all I love the Jenny-and-Giles-cuteness of your story <3
lots of love
Stefanie
PS: I still have the desire to slap Ralph... xD |
 Narnel 2009-09-28 . chapter 15Aw, love...
Ok, this was an incredible chapter so I'll review bit by bit :P
I have to admit, on the first paragraph I was like, Yes!!... Oh, it's a dream. :L Although actually, I do like Ralph as a character, he's willing to go against his family and everything for Jenny. I do feel sorry for him. So kudos for creating a character that is so well-rounded! :)
Anyway... Aw, Giles is actually the cutest xD Thankyou for making this the reason for his lying to her!! I was getting worried for a second there ;)
Poor Jenny :( she feels guilty about everything!! Lighten up, you have an amazing boyfriend! :P Seriously though, her emotions and 'inner turmoil' are well thought-out and realisitc. Also all the characters are still so in-character it's amazing!! This story gets better with every chapter (if thats possible ;))
Ok, think I'm done... Whew that was a long one ;) And yay, now I can say once again... update soon! xD
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 Narnel 2009-09-28 . chapter 14Aw poor Lucy... she was so nice :'(
Once again I have to say the whole demon heart thing is a brilliant idea (and in true Buffy style ;) ) seriously though, it should be an actual episode.
Anyway... :P
Grr Ralph, how dare you... >:( Ah well, the good side of that is Jenny's out of the hospital and Ralph's clutches, and into her Rupert's arms... aw!! :D
Will keep reading... lol
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 Narnel 2009-09-28 . chapter 13BACK OFF RALPH *growls at him*
Awesome chapter, so exciting!! Good that Xander has his own little 'project' and I love the internal dialogue :)
Also, demon heart transplant - you're an actual genius! You should write your own tv show :)
As always, loving the fluff xD
Well, I'll keep reading...
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 Narnel 2009-09-28 . chapter 12*sings* I'm ba-ack!! :D
I watch it with my friend and we're going to watch the last ep tomorow, so I figured I wouldn't find many spoilers I didn't already know. Plus I couldn't make myself wait any longer xP
So review! (Take that, Ralph!)
Interesting thing, having some sort of spell on the hospital. It's true, on the show it always seems to happen to the Scoobies so your story has actually made it more realistic! :P There were a lot of Ralph scenes and not so many Giles scenes which is a little :( but neccessary to the plot I guess. And plot is good!! I'm wondering what Giles is up to though... not telling her where he was and all... Hmm.
Anyway, the good thing about reading this now is that I can go ahead and read the next chapter! xD
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 ElephantTheory 2009-09-14 . chapter 15 Aww I got kinda upset when I found out Ralph getting hs arse kicked by Giles was only a daydream! lol ;)
Still completely in love with this fic! No many writers have kept me hooked as long as you have :)
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 BernieR 2009-09-13 . chapter 15This chapter was AMAZING!
You totally threw me off at the begining with Rupert and Rpalh fighting, I was all, "Wait, when did this happen?!" I was all set to look back at the last chapter, thinking I missed something, lol!
Then poor Jenny feeing guilty. She should have just told Rupert, it wasn't her fault, it was Ralphs!
Also, the fght between Ralph and his brother, I totally ddn't know who to root for cause I wanted Ralph to gt his butt kcked, but I also wanted him to kick his brother's butt. many mixed emotions there, lol!
Then the scene with Xander had me rolling, and OMG (total wannabe moment, sorry, lol) she said his name and he noticed! True it wasn't till he hung up, but still, lol!
Great chapter Jess! I'm loving every secnd of it, ok, maybe not Lucy having to die cause that was sad, but in general, well you know what I mean, LOL! |
 WastedYouth98 2009-09-13 . chapter 15Very good, at least Ralph got hit by someone, poor Jenny all this is getting to her. Giles is the most sweetest guy in the world, and I love he bought her a laptop. |
 ElephantTheory 2009-09-12 . chapter 14 Yay! Jenny gave Ralph a good kick in the groin! :) :)
lol
I don't like him much but I'm intrigued to see what part he plays in this fic now
thanks for another well written chapter :)
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 WastedYouth98 2009-09-12 . chapter 14I seriously hate Ralph, Giles should get to punch him. Lucy's gone *sniffs*. Great chapter and, I totally understand the school thing. |
 BernieR 2009-09-11 . chapter 14ROFL! I totally love Xander! And that part about Giles having a girlfriend, priceless. I half expected Jenny to takethe phone to talk to him and then opps, it's Xander, lol!
And o, I wanna cry, poor Lucy, she had no idea what was happening. Such a sweet old woman, now I'm sad. :( Even though I know it had to be done.
And dun dun dun, Gioles knows, Xander might know, lol!
GR at stupid Ralph for kissing Jenny and YAY for Giles wantin to kick some demon **! LOL!
Aww, now she knows for sue why Giles never asked about her. So sweet moment between them. I can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
 ElephantTheory 2009-09-07 . chapter 13 :O Lucy's evil?? aw I liked her!
Can't wait for the next chapter :) :)
I'm serious, your writing gets better with every chapter
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