So...it's supposed to be a twilight story but you changed their names? For what purpose? Kinda ridiculous to me...I had no idea what was goin on, thought the chick was Alice then she busts out a diff name? I don't see the point -.-' other than that it seems like it'd be a pretty decent story.

LOVED IT!

Me do love some Quileutes. XD

Wo. Loved it.

Loved it. And Spaghetti and Meatballs - YUMM.

She has amazing self control then. Loved it.

Well, at least she didn't kill any humans. Lol. Loved the opening.

awesome!

update soon

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Your story is really really good! I can't wait to read the rest. Please update soon!

I was sure the little old lady was going to try and poison her, haha. that would've been funny to see her try! I like this story, but I think you're rushing things to much... apart from that, it's great! UPDATE SOON!(btw, I have a little question: is this post BD?)

awesome!

love it...