i love it! i think this is a really good story to continue, if you wish, but it's also fine as a oneshot.

Aww! This was so cute! I'd love to see more from it!

this is cute!

continue, or i shall eat you

ehh... probably not, but i wont let you live without me bugging the crap outta you

and if you HAVE continued, please send me the link.

great job, BTW