MAN! IT WAS JUST GETTING GOOD! PLZ FINISH SOON!

Good story!

Very interesting so far between Ron and Bonnie. It looks like Bonnie is learning that it is person that matters, not the society. I hope that she will further learn about that.

Eagerly await another chapter!

I just read your 5 chapters and the story is pretty good aside from a glitch here or there (but I can't speak as I have them too). I am surprised that Bonnie just didn't wake up Ron and have him go to bed while she took the couch but still, nice move so it gave him a chance to wake up the way he did.

Great Start. That being said it looks like bonnie may have to slow things down in order to get ron. Im interested in seeing how you plan to portray kim. Will you go for the tried and true green eyed monster. I always thought it would be cool if bonnie would team up with shego in order to destroy kim and keep ron to herself. oh well just an idle thought. great writing keep it up.

Very good one; Ron's reaction was quite interesting.

Keep the good writing.

Ah, forbidden Ronbon love. It's going to be pretty tough for Ron to keep a secret.

Anyways, keep up the good work.

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Sharper

This is a very good story so far.. I'm interested in seeing what happens next.

BonRonnieness is always good, and your stories are always entertaining. The cause/effect is great, but if I may suggest shedding a little more light on the whole crushing on Ron thing? Till next chapter...

Avid Reader

Very good one. Nice interaction between Ron and Bonnie.

I actually liked the Mask (the first one; the second one... not a good idea); then again, I'm a toon geek.

Keep the good writing.

Nice, very good work, like the way RonBon use scrabble to work things out. But I gotta agree with Ron, I wasn't aware that Brick was that old.

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RedneckGeek

Now we're seeing a Ronbon here. Good wordplay at the very end.

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Sharper

awesome fic only prob with it is that its too short in my opinion

okay well,

I like your style of writing in the it flows fairly smoothly. The plot line is setting itself up nicely and it will be nice to see what happens in the next chapter. On this track I think you have a decent story on your hands if you finish it.

Plus RonBon fics are fun to read.

Good interaction with Ron and Bonnie. Tipping her hand with her possible feelings towards Ron.

Also, I think a word is missing in this next sentence.

She knew she could something but she wasn’t sure

Otherwise you're doing a great job.

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Still enjoying the story, even though I said it didn't go into too much detail, perhaps it may need a little bit more.

For example, how did Ron add the Chinese atmosphere at home. Lanterns? Chairs? Table cloth? I guess it gives the reader more of an experience of what's happening.

I do wonder how Kim will react when she learns of Bonnie's feelings towards Ron.

Keep at it, I am enjoying the story.

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