Good work

I don't think I can click the little box next to 'Add Story to Favorites' hard enough.

This IS a good fic, altought the ending was a little short and lacking.

Alchimie was a fantastic story that I absolutely adored... until the last chapter. Chapter 12 was such a let-down that I felt I'd been reading a Stephen King novel and it turned out the cause of everyone's misery was another fracking spider! It was incredibly easy to point out that you had lost interest in the story, and that saddens me, especially since you decided not to let Moldy-Voldy win. Hope you don't lose interest in any of your other stories!

...so what the hell happened to voldemort?!

holy crap! this is the first time i've ever seen a percent sign successfully used in a story! usually, there's some kind of bug or something that just edits it out...

i really hope ed learns proper english soon. his german accent is getting annoying to read.

this is the most amazing fma/hp xover i have ever read! the german and broken english was a bit difficult at first, but i got used to it (and seriously freaked out my family when i tried saying it aloud XD)i would love you forever if you made a sequel, but i have no clue what you would do. the ending didn't suck! it was a good, if abrupt, way to end this!

I love your use of german words throughout the whole story, I am not very good at german myself since I am still learning it at school, but most words in german look very much or sound very much like some words in dutch which makes me able to read them. It adds something fresh to the story instead that a foreign character speaks the native language(of the country he is supposingly in) without making any mistakes at all.
I like your story and I hope you will keep writing stories.

"JUST WHAT DID YOU DO NOW?!?"
and then comes the wrench.

Megalomaniacs were nothing but trouble.
ain't that the truth!

you do know that you left a cliffie on the last chapter, and never really told us what happened...right?

What sort of people did not have coffee? MORNING PEOPLE!

“I vill go easy on them. Not too many vill get injured.” His smile turned into a wicked smirk. “Dat is, if dey are fast enough.”

they're doomed...

So characteristic of Ed to refer to himself as an idiot to his class when they don't know that he was talking about himself

YAY! Al got a cat! I like how you made this story more true than others because you gave Ed a German accent.