 allegator20 2009-12-05 . chapter 4Wow what an amazing Idea for a story. So creative! Only on chapter 2 so far but wanted to leave feedback now since I tend not too. I found your second Legend of the Seeker story on the Confessor and Seeker board and was happy to see you had another one! |
 kellentia 2009-11-12 . chapter 5hellO! wow great and interesting plot u have here. looking forward to reading more! update soon :) |
 Lord Darken Rahl 2009-11-03 . chapter 5yippie Darken Rahl is alive!! love your story thanks for updating
please update soon I want to know his plans!
greetz Lord Darken Rahl:) |
 Ksasera Aditi 2009-10-17 . chapter 4Great start. Was a little wary of the "in our reality and time" part but it is awesome never the less. :) Next chapter please? |
 Lord Darken Rahl 2009-08-30 . chapter 3wow amazing chapter and last chapter is amazing too
I have a question is the Lord Rahl who they woke up Lord Darken Rahl? it will be a good twist if it's him :) |
 Nicci Death'sMistress 2009-08-17 . chapter 4So this is in Richard's non-magic universe thing? That makes sense because in Confessor I saw the similarities between his alternate universe and our world.
Anyway, I have to say that wearing glasses and drinking Red Bull just doesn't sound like Richard, but otherwise he sounds like he does in SoT, minus the speeches about magic, fighting, and how the Order sucks. (P.S. Is Nicci here too? Nicci is my favorite character. And Warren, because that would be nice for Verna. And does Cara act all Mord-Sith-y, because violence would probably creep people out.)
Spelling corrections: Adie, Zedd |
 WhiteRose621 2009-07-26 . chapter 3I am slightly confused, but that was a good chapter. I laughed when Cara woke Kahlan up. Hurry with the next chapter. |
 Nicci Death'sMistress 2009-07-21 . chapter 3Creepy chapter. I feel so sorry for kahlan, she doesn't have Richard with her. The whole spirit-awakening thing is a bit confusing, but I think I understand: Zedd, Raina, Rachel, Chase, Berdine, Cara, Verna, NICCI (yay Nicci!), Kahlan, Jennsen, Tom, and Benjamin are the modern-day versions of the New World people who died a long time ago. That's why there are alarm clocks and stuff. And richard's spirit isn't in a person yet. I don't quite get the scene in chapter two with Zedd doing a ritual over Richard and Kahlan's graves though... Is he ensuring that all their spirits will wake up later on?
I love how the present day nonmagic works corresponds with the ending of Confessor, the other works Richard made seemed to me a lot like our world at the beginning of human civilization. I like how your story kinda picks up from there. |
 Nicci Death'sMistress 2009-07-21 . chapter 2YES! YES! NICCI IS IN A STORY!
(cough cough) Sorry. I am an absolute fan of Nicci (as you would notice if you read my profile), and I am super excited to read a fanfic with her actually speaking more than one line. Nicci rocks!
Anyway, this chapter was a bit confusing with the stuff about Richard and Kahlan's deaths, but whatever. I like how this relates to the books more. |
 Nicci Death'sMistress 2009-06-27 . chapter 1Yay! Kahlan is here! Anyway, I Iike the mystery. One thing: Doesnt Kahlan put her daggers in her boots? Well that's what happens in LotS, I don't remember from SoT. |
 girlbrighteyes 2009-06-27 . chapter 1im curious to see whats going on update soon |