The moment you mentioned the ship being bigger on the inside, I suspected the reference is Doctor Who. How many sci-fi shows do you know? Loved how you used Markus to ease the tension between Kirk and Spock. But 'Uncle Clovis'?! Where did that one come from?

I wonder how mad Kirk's going to get to Spock.
Cool thing you did for de la Luz!
Can't wait for more.

Well, Kirk is likely **. Poor Spock, just wait until McCoy arrives.

We finally met the Dunna-reems! yeah!!
Where are McCoy and Lady Mina? I can't wait until the next chapter, keep up the good work!

Murphey's Law really should be the Star Fleet moto, it fits better than Ex Luna, scientia.

Theres only one race in all of scifi that I know of, that's bald with bones on the back of their heads: The Minbari. I like the Minbari.

Anyway, the Duman-reems will be interesting to finally met. Do they have something against Lady Mina? Or is that just how they effect her?

Don't know who, but I would guess they are Minbari from the description and language.

I just found your story. The chapters are short, but not overly so. There's enough intrigue to keep me interested, but not enough to satisfy. Please update...

It just keeps getting better.

wow. very good idea. please go on writing. i´m wondering what kirk says about the disk from uhura and if spock changed the conversation on it. I also want to know which information will be given to the federation and how kirk reacts. thanks for the first few chapters.

Good luck to all of them, their going to need it.

I just found your Keepers series and am enjoying it. Hope to see more.

I love this story line, keep them comming

Just a few more days, if everything goes well, and Spock and other Vulcans won't have to worry about thier alliance with the Keepers. Still, its the Enterprise crew they'll work it out.

'Show' eh? What kind of show exactly? Spock Dancing?... :}... Lord Christopher is probably refering to diplimatic situations. Or the dancing thing. Now that would be interesting.