 Spottedfang 2009-11-28 . chapter 1Aw~ |
 Waruitenshi 2009-09-16 . chapter 1 Aw! My eyes nearly watered from the touchingness! lol |
 Xx Clear Dawnlight xX 2009-08-07 . chapter 1._. Oh, so I DIDN'T review. Thought I had.
Anyway... this is my all-time favourite Okami fanfiction. ^^
<.< And my current favourite pairing.
You're a great writer, this is one of the gems you accasionally find on this site. I think you got their characters spot on. ^^
I did notice two tiny errors, but one of them was just a typo (and I can't find it now) and the other was 'admit it your in awe' (should have been you're). Neither of them really affects the story in anyway, so you can feel free to just ignore this Grammar Nazi.
Hope to see more of your work. ^^
Kura-chan |
 ArtificialRangerLiuria 2009-07-14 . chapter 1OH.MY.META.KNIGHT.
That was freakin' AWESOME!
It totally is WRONG that there are only 9 Ammun stories in the entire Okami archive.But just you wait.When I get my flash drive,I'll start typing my AWESOME Okami story(and the adult fans will get a little surprise later in the story...Here's a little hint:They have kids!And we all know how that happens...Um,of course,Amako--NOT Ammy,that is westernized--is in her hot human form.)and post it.Unfortunately,my mom doesn't get the importance of Flash Drives(in fact,she thinks powerPoints are...stupid),so that'll be in a million and 3 years.Sorry.But I totally agree with your views,and this story was awesome.it made me cry!And I'm in public!(library)^-^ |
 Jellobell 2009-07-07 . chapter 1 Thank you, I have also noticed the lack of IssunxAmmy and I’m glad someone is doing something about it. The story is very sweet, and I thought your portrayal of Issun was very true to his character. The only problem I can think of is that there are some minor grammatical errors which can be a bit jarring. Other than that though, great job. |
 Spirit-wolfgodofnippon 2009-07-03 . chapter 1 FINALLY! A ISSUN AND AMMY FIC!! I loved it! I thought it fit but i kinda thought that Ammy didnt really mind her wolf form. But i loved Issun's trick ^_^ *claps* 5/5 |
 ruff1298 2009-06-30 . chapter 1Wow, that was actually a pretty good read. I enjoy the progression to the drama (though it was a little lacking in the paragraphing department) and the twist at the end which was extremely good and very Issun like, and the last line was also great. I apologize for the short critique, but I really can't find much to say about this so 4/5. |