Haha it wasn't lame at all
More cuddling would've been cute, but then again they did do quiet a lot of that
Overall I liked it

Dude, I really liked this story.
It was amazing.

I really loved this story. x
;)
:D

I so LOVE this story!Please keep up or you´ll make me very sad! :3 Thankies!

chapter five was the cutest thing ever

these last two were great man, seriously

Hey why is this thing rated M? Like are you putting sex scenes in it
I just wanted to know because if you are that's fine but
I want to know if I can continue reading this story or if I should stop and read something with a lower rating

and if your wondering why I'm even reading it in the first place, I know that sometimes people rate stories M when they could be at a much lower rating

Your story seems interesting but you should ggo over it more and cut it into more paragraphs whenever someone new starts to speak its a new paragraph

Hope you write more Jenkato

TAKATO AND HENRY! Not near enough of them!!

Okay, now please take all the following positively :)

First, it was kinda short :)

Then, there were alot of misspellings and grammar errors, HOWEVER! Like you said, your not from the US so you wouldn't know right? So i have an idea... Why don't you let me be your Beta. If you don't know what that means, it means, you send me the story, and I'll fix the spelling and grammer :D. What do you think?