This was very interesting I loved it

I love this! I love the drama and emotion. I'll read more this one later. This is good and I'm glad to see you're not homophobic. I love it so far.

that was... COOL!

it was a great story you have talent

You done a very good job on this story! I loved it and how you put lots of detail in it. I also love the ending with yugi and atem expressing the love to each other. And I would love if the was a part two like someone else said. This story was to wonderful I could keep reading it over and over. Atemxyugi 4ever.

woow this is really good . i wish i could write something as good as this. :D keep up the good work i would read the rest but i can't school night.

-Nythera

A good start to a story, but I have a question on the details: namely, what did Kaiba dress up as? Or was he his usual, stubborn, funless self?

That...was...ASWOME!please,please,please,please make part 2 of the !

I LOVED this ending! It was cute, sad, and heartfelt at the same time.

Wow I hate the endings! :( Well now the final conclusion... I liked the history; I couldnt review before cuz I had been a little bussy but I like it :) you didnt miss any detail. and the final lemon XD you had made a whole history. Well... til the next fiction _

I adored the part with the blood lust. It was really cute. I can't wait to read what happens next.

I guess one thing that I find... slow... about this, is that there doesn't seem to be much of a plot and not very many surprises.

Really COOL chapter. So what happens next? I can't wait to read the rest of it.

I like it. I think that Nina is showing to much interest on Yami 0_ó and Yugi's grampa is missing? Wow suspense... conti please... _

Wow Van Hellsing is going to teach Yami how to use his powers? Cool! I still feel pitty for Yami but... the history must go on! Conti soon _