A great story. Very good.

congradulations, this is my first enterprise fanfic read of! (nearly) its good, interesting plot and you have done the characters well!

i thought you were a trekker, judging by the name

.. *thinks desperately* I think i'm thinking of mayweather...never mind, I haven't got a clue. call myself an enterprise fan"!

I loved this. Great story, well written and nicely wrapped up. It was terrific that Hoshi got to be a hero for a change and I loved all the crew interactions. And see the Ice Queen thaw a little was wonderful. Thank you, Ali D :)

THis is a great story! It has everything the series has-adventure, humor, and lots of action. I hope this author has another great story like this one for us soon. If you read this, you will not be sorry. Keep up the great work, princess!

good job

Aww! why do you always hurt my Trip? My poor baby... Great story, I really enjoyed it! What did T'Pol say to upset him? If it was part of the 1st conversation, I must have missed it. I hope to see more soon! Great Job, Princess!

Well, I'll give you points for plot concept, but I'd have to take them away for execution. The characters were charicatures of themselves. They weren't believable. They certainly weren't professional, which shows especially in your characterization of Reed. And what logic could cause him to leap from the evidence on the ship to "slave ship". That was totally contrived. As well as the ship hiding "beneath". Sensors are not eyes. The sensors would have detected it. It seems like you are new to writing and I do hope that you improve. Keep working on it, but get some beta readers to help you along.