 Tossino 2009-07-10 . chapter 1This is an interesting idea... Not quite sure I can really see it, but it was really well written, as your fics always are, so I couldn't help but enjoy it. Very beautiful descriptions and it had just the right mood for a one-night stand. I love how Kanda forgot Lavi's name, it's just a thing he would do. XD
Lovely, just lovely. |
 LonelyFantasyXIII 2009-06-30 . chapter 1:D Beer brings back memories for me for these two...lol I read the summary and I was OMG load faster computer! Very very modern told story, it was like they live in this time with us :D
Loved it! |
 LaraBlackEarl 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Nice lustful fic XD Hahaha! Needed some RaYu lust after a while, ya know? A breath of fresh air XD
Just a week before RaYu fest... Jeez, time sure passes by way too fast. Need to hurry up OTL
Anyways, loved the descriptions, loved the atmosphere. I absolutely love the night and if it's got some RaYu in it, obviously it is way better! Just fast sex with no compromises, hell yeah! XD May sound weird, but the 'Shut up, Rabi' line gave me a weird feeling of familiarity XD Dunno, it kinda gave me the impression they did know each other but they were like...playing to stay away from routine XD Ma,sorry. Me and my weird thoughts. I'm not saying it was bad. Actually I liked that feeling XD Hahaha!
Amazing and light... Yuh, yuh, amazing as always, Kuro n.ñ My bed-time tale XD Hahaha! Sorry, this may be kinda random or stupid. I'm kinda happy XD
Love ya~ And your fics as well~ XD |
 Morphine Dementia 2009-06-28 . chapter 1OMG, a prostitute!Kanda or something? That's hot, and really interesting, and yet I fail to be able to see it D; I think Kanda would rather commit seppuku than give away his body. D:
Though, as long as it's Lavi, it's fine.
As always, your writing and details are awesome. I love how you portray emotions. It's like I can feel everything while reading. Even if the concept was a little weird to the weird me, I totally loved it. Hot, angsty. Just too bad they're not forever together afterwards, but maybe they meet again? I hope.
Also, one tiny nitpick, how come to Kanda's "Who are you?" Lavi answers "Rabi. What's yours?". Shouldn't have Kanda asked "What's your name?" ?
Anyway, awesome work as always, looking forward for more! <3 |
 Halane 2009-06-28 . chapter 1Hi!!
OMG, this was so... dirty in a way XD I rally liked it, all that teasing aura and that... man-of-the-world behaviour XD
Your descriptions keep improving each time! You should be proud of yourself! >/<
And Lavi is surely a devil, but he's such a handsome devil... Who wouldn't fall into the temptation? XD
I think there's no need to tell you which sentence was my favourite...
'“I just forgot your name.” Kanda flatly pointed out with a sheepish pull to his lips that Rabi assumed would the closest thing to a smile he would get tonight.'
It was so Yu-like XD
'“Good thing too. If you were a whore, you seem like the types to overcharge.” He grinned in the dark before Kanda stood up to flick the lights on in a distracted quest for the shirt he came in wearing.'
The best hahahaha And it's so true... Though I think he should have answered before having sex with him XD But hey, that's his problem XD
'“Give up the world and be with me, just one night.”
It was a whisper and the hot breath was a promise from the devil himself.'
OMG, I'd've melted if he whispered like that in my ear... SO SEXY! *¬*
'“It’s still dark.”
There was no measurement of how long one night was. He played on that fact.'
Take that! You fail, Yu! XD
'He lit up a cigarette of the cheapest kind'
Cheap cigarettes have an special charm, don't you think so?
'Just one night, that’s all they ever needed.'
(8)Forever is our today(8) (the song was in my mind through the whole ff and then I read this hahahah)
See you son!
Kss! |
 Julye loves Lavi 2009-06-27 . chapter 1Kro-chan is back! -dances around-
Is this a oneshot? Because I really really really wanna read more! -pouts-
Its short, simple but I love it as always! I really missed your writing and this made me so excited! I wanna write something too but there's no time left =__=
I have a lot to draw so I guess I'll just do some graphic... |
 Nush-Mish 2009-06-27 . chapter 1I LOVED THIS DARLING ;D
It's not the sappy stuff i cook up, certainly xD I like the way their story is so gritty and unconventional- like a real one-night stand should be. xD And i think it's hilarious that we keep having the same ideas for some reason OTL. We must be becoming phsycic xD
LOVED EXTREMELY, WIFE. ;)
~nush |
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