 angelwings 6/22/07 . chapter 4 i love this story could you PLEASE finish it!
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Ash is cured of his amnesia.
Misty confesses her love too Ash .
Lapras, Brock and Picachu all come to save them .
They figure out what happened to that tentacruel .
They find out that that tentacruel was one of the weaker ones .
They try to get off of the island, agenste all of of those
Super-Powered tentacruel . |
 Stoko 11/5/02 . chapter 4Come on! Write more, please? I know its been a while, a looooong while but the fics still here so I'm guessin you are too. This is really good, I hope to see more. |
 anon 8/30/02 . chapter 4 PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON. I AM JUST DYING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS. BY THE WAY YOUR DOING A REALY GOOD JOB WITH THE STORY SO FAR!1
SIGNED,
LYNN L. LEWIS |
 Ashachu 8/1/02 . chapter 4 This is a really good story so far. update soon |
 ravendream 7/31/02 . chapter 4PLEASE! Write more! This is such an awesome story! Oh, and for the record, I've read the other 'Ocean of Tears' , Let me just say that this story is far too different to be copied from it. |
 dagger2004 7/18/02 . chapter 4this is starting to become a great story. i have a suggestion for the next chapters. If the tentacruels are the powerful and are local then maybe the amnesia can't wear off like the dilluted water poison did, b/c the poison isn't to it's fullest strength. But maybe the cure can be found somewhere deep in the island. Why don't u have them setoff looking for it since they still have a couple of ash's pokemon there. this could also lead to ash remembering a little about his emotions towards Misty and u could have some fun with this idea. Just some suggestions from one if ur big fans:) KEEP WRITING MORE STORIES!:) |
 r.mai 3/28/02 . chapter 4awwww...there's no more |
 r.mai 3/28/02 . chapter 3awww...he dun remember her |
 r.mai 3/28/02 . chapter 2wah! what's the tenacool gonna do? |
 r.mai 3/28/02 . chapter 1ooooo...what an angsty story. kewlios... plus i haven't watched that far yet. are they even there yet? olivine city? i dun think so. they're taking a hella freaking long ass time to get there soooo... anywho... cya next chapter. |
 LB 2/6/02 . chapter 1 i got a suggestion... um... to get them off the island i was thinkinf that guy... ruby? rudy? you know, the gym leader from the orange island who flirted with misty, could be looking for pokemon in the area and see them. he could take em back to mainland in his boat. it's just a suggestion shurgs came to me during school grins sheepishly no wonder i can never stay focused in class... |
 LB 2/5/02 . chapter 4 jumps up and down excitedly GOOD GOOD GOOD! so... when you gonna update again? sorry, no suggestions. keep writing! |
 Light of Hope1 1/27/02 . chapter 4GAHHH! i NEED MORE. when is it ganna be uptaded?or howeva ya spell it. write...MORE! |
 Evil Gohan 1/13/02 . chapter 4 another smashing chapter keep it up. |
 Bellossom-chan 1/12/02 . chapter 4... and... whayt's next?... I Want To KNOW! |