Awesome!

Everyone's in character!

Great chapter!

Great story!

That was an interesting meeting. The canon characters are much less interested in what other people think than these two, which makes it clear that these two people have been through a great deal of trouble in their lives.

I thought I had seen this elsewhere, but now I'm not so sure. I like the premise, at least as I suspect it will turn out!

another fantastic chapter. i cant wait to read the next one. i'll be agonizing over it until you update, so please hurry.

~BtFM

Very imaginative story idea. Well written here and well thought. Traveling at a good but not too fast pace. Characterizations are excellent. :)

He's daft if he thinks of Luna as a vulnerable innocent - she's way tougher than he is.

Btw the peeking you do with your eyes is thus spelled, with two 'e's.

Ah, tea. The universal cure for awkward situations. If both are taking the blame for the kiss, at least they're acknowledging that they both wanted to kiss the other. :)

Nice chapter.

My dear girl, you are simply a breath of fresh air!

You're style of writing is crisp and clean, yet remains bittersweet throughtout each and every chapter. *blinks* Wait a tick! Did I just give a review or describe an apple...?

Well, anyway, I'm not a fan of happy-go-lucky fiction. I prefer a touch of sorrow in my reading. And with that said, I wish you all the best and may your muse continue to be forthcoming.

Lovely chapter.

Thanks for the fast update. I love the aftermath of the kiss. It's not often that a writer puts Severus in a position to feel so uncomfortable that he can't act. I suspect the potion has less to do with their changes in perception than they think.

Great job.

very sweet and nicely written, humble snape is a most unexpected character.

Of course Luna's Most Unexpected when it comes to the aftereffects. Here's to hoping they get closer than ever.

Welcome back! I've missed this story.

First of all, chapter six was amazing! Just thought I'd let you know here. SNAPE KISSED LUNA! YAY! But...she ran away. Aw... It'll be ok, Sev. Chin up, kid. Anyway, the way you changed the potion from being an anti-depressant to something that can show you what could potentially make you happy... Ingenious. Really, that was pretty cool. I love the idea. I wonder...was Luna's the same as Snape's? Is that why she ran? Hm...

I love how snarky Snape was to the sales clerk, poor guy. Very in-character for him, as was Arther Weasley. He's awesome. Mrs. Weasley really sent him packages of stuff, huh? That is so cool, and so like the Weasley family. It's really sad that Snape never received them, but in a place like Azkaban, I guess that's to be expected. Lame.

Please update soon! I can't wait to read Luna's thoughts on all this! You're doing a wonderful job with them both!

Really interesting chapter. Severus didn't get Molly's packages.

Totally sweet.