great job w/ the chapter! So glad that you're feeling better and good luck on your trip!

Gah! There's this horrible idea that I have in my head. I'll keep it to myself because I despise the negative kind of drama that my idea is.


-jw`chan

Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Great chapter! can't wait for the next update!:)

It's all formatted to be in the center of the page.


-jw`chan
PS: Don't worry about me leaving your story. I'm devoted because it's pretty inspiring.

great chapter! can't wait for the next chapter and have fun at the beach! ;)

Nice updates as always. Keep it up and I can't wait for more to see what happens next. Update Soon!

nice update! Can't wait for more Dasey!

This chappie left me feeling giddy.


-jw`chan ^-^

they finally met! can't wait to see what's happening next...keep up the good work!

Thanks for the shout out and you're welcome. I can't wait until they finally meet each other! Keep up the good work! :)

I love the twist that you put on the scene. If I didn't know any better I'd swear that he was developing Paranoid Schizophrenia.


-jw`chan ^-^
PS: I spotted a few typos; nothing too serious.

Let them meet each other!
Great story btw =D
and update soon please

nice update. I think that they should bump into each other at a party with both of them still thinking that the other is not real. I could beta (if that's the right term) this story for you if you'd like just PM me. :)

I got a bit carried away so I'll send my brainstorm your way through a personal message.


-jw`chan ^-^