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xDarakuxShitaxTenshix
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
loved it
minniemousemom
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
great update as always! Thanks for the early gift!
beloveddaughteroftheking
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
Yay! You updated again! And there was much rejoicing! I hope all that retailing went okay and thanks for the early update.

I like how you don't just throw Itachi and Sakura together out of lust, though you could say in a way in a way, that they started to 'sleep' together quickly. The reason I like this story is because it is not based on pure animalistic emotions like lust. Instead, there is something pure and wonderful about the emotion of love, especially when in the confines of a marriage.
IceButterflyXIII
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
AHH! I loved the progression in their relationship this chapter! it was nice and slow with no rapid 'Romeo and Juliet fall in love at first sight at some random party' kind of love but one of realization with reason that are not all that random. ^^ Please hurry for the next part, I can't wait for the action!
RozenMaiden14
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
Frickin' awesome gift. XD Thanks. I really liked how this chapter had a lot of progress, though it didn't feel rushed, you know? Itachi didn't suddenly stop being the person he has been his entire life just because of a little time with Sakura. He didn't stop thinking like a shinobi. However, he did seem happier, and they are getting somewhere at about the right pace.

I can't wait for your next update!
HarmonyRose
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
This is about the third time I've read this chapter and it remains good each time :) There are a few minor grammar errors, but nothing huge just one or two things that I noticed. I think that you do a very nice job balancing the emotional intensity with humor so that the chapter isn't overwhelmingly emotional so early on. I know it'll be awhile for the next chapter, but I'm sure it'll be worth the wait. Have a Merry Christmas if I don't get to speak to you beforehand.

~HarmonyRose
Rosenkreuz Orden
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
i simply love this chapter because it opened a new door towards their relationship. i adore it when sakura said that she want to meet him. the overall relationship of itachi and sakura, be it in yours or other stories, is so complex, that i find many authors messing it up by going too fast. you are amazing by making them "meet" eachother slowly, setting the ground for them to walk on towards their eventual love. i love it, some moments bring tears to eyes because their characters are so different yet the same. it makes me giddy. ^^

i enjoyed this chapter very much, it WAS a nice christmas gift, lol.

please update as soon as you can, hopefully all your problems are resolved, and have Happy Hollidays. :)

P.S. please dont forget about Tempest Keep either. that story has so much potential, and i want to see it play out too. ^^
angel897
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
love it please write more soon kay
Anonymous
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
Aww...I loved this chapter!
Sakimi1014
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
Lovely story! Thanks! Please update soon!
callmelover
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
ah omg i loved it! thanks for the early christmas present :D

lmao i loved it and they finally kissed! and TWICE!! lol XD


loved it i nearly had a heart attack when he said "Come to bed with me" i was like holy crap bold much? XD

please update soon!!

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when do you think that will be :)
midnight000shadow
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
so god =] i loved it! i have been desperately waiting for an update! yay! totally looking forward to the next one.



u rock =]
Princess Ren
2009-12-22 . chapter 13
Finally! After a long while, you finally updated! I'm so happy! The chapter did not disappoint! Itachi and Sakura seems getting close! And the fluff! Is it the beginning? I can't wait for more of that! So what did Kakashi want with Itachi? And what about the threat? Hope you post soon! Keep up the good work!
dreamseeker15
2009-12-08 . chapter 1
this was amazing story, I love your ideas and the way you xhanged naruto. I hope to read more once you publish more.
callmelover
2009-12-08 . chapter 12
wait so you are gonna continue with the story say like in january or feb?? right? or no?

cause i really do love this story
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