I love it! The letter writing could be a little less cryptic, but other than that this promises to be a great FanFic!

Interesting. Is the woman with long green hair sailor pluto?

CoM and SM have to be my favorite series ever, thus the reason why I want to see if this cross works or not.

Firstly, when does this story take place? Post Stars? Post Will of the Empress? It'd be very nice to know. I'm sure you'll reveal this later but if you told me when this took place in your author's notes I, for example, might not be asking you to pair Daja up with Ami. (And in all seriousness, if you plan to have pairings, Daja/Ami would be hilarious)

Second off, I'm a little miffed by the use of what seems to be an original villain. The Sailor Moon universe has bad guys to spare, surely you could alter one of them for your purposes. But that's just my dislike of original characters in fanfiction. Depending on how well you write, I may come to like this "Lady Zephyr" in later chapters.

I like how you made Niko and Setsuna slightly connected. It makes sense. Niko and Setsuna both can (somewhat) see into the future after all. I'd to know some more back story about the two of them (if they have any at all). If this is post Shatterglass, I hope Setsuna and Tris have some interesting conversations.

And the title? Nine other fics have it. But I'm sure once the plot is relived you could think up a more original title (Titles are generally a pain in the ass anyway).

Hope to see some really good future chapters.

(I'm sure I missed 5+ typos but I'm running on low amounts of sleep)

-Malacoda