Great story, good to see Woody point of view

There is so much I want to say that I don't know where to start...
I'll try with Bug. I always like it when he opens up, probably because I know what keeping it all bottled up will do to you. You made his opening up completely believable. I wasn't reading - I was watching and listening Bug speak to Woody. And Woody's little observations about Bug (i.e. "a man of facts") only completed the picture. Great job!
It was also good to see Woody admitting his feelings for Jordan to Bug. And it's great that in the well-known scene you focused on Woody. During the scene, Jordan's got her feelings written all across the face, but Woody's an enigma, sort of. You wrote his part of the story beautifully.
Keep up the good work!

Wow! Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! Absolutely perfect!

Hi Mexwojo,

Nice work. This was a sweet peek into those lost hours up on the mountain. The end worked well, too, since you left their future uncertain. Good job.

Peace,
Wendie

Wonderful story! I still miss the show and that scene between Woody and Jordan was lacking so much-thanks for giving me more. Great job!

Very nicely written. I love it when you expand on what happened on the show and make it more real and more believable. That last show needed to be about 3 hours long, but you have covered some of the gaps nicely. Thanks.

I loved this.

I like a lot! Especially the description of Bug being a man of facts. Very good writing, keep it up!