I just found this story and since I like the movie, I thought I would give it a read. Glad I did.

That said I would love to see you expand on this story or do one that is similar that goes beyond where you stopped with this one.

Pure magnificence. Oh, this was so beautiful, so poetic. There was one line in particular that I envy you for crafting: "...the ethereal ballet it was performing." Glorious, truly.

The only criticism I can offer is that, at the beginning the sentences seemed a little too long for themselves, but that Might just be me.

Off to look at your other writing now!

A beautiful depiction of my favorite scene! You portrayed a very real and believable Lili. I loved it! I hope to see more from you in the future!

Legend is one of my favorite movies and more often than not any fanfiction you find for legend is just awful. However, this was one of the most well written one I've read in years. I only wish it weren't a one-shot. You did a wonderful job. Thank you for sharing this with us.

-Jessica

Quite well-done, I wish there was more Legend fanfiction. First of all, you should check out my Legend one-shot.

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Second, I think you'd like this. I worked ** it. :)

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Be sure and reply to me, please

Loved It. You captured the feeling and conflict of the scene perfectly. And some a story from Legend fandom is long overdue.

*purrs* that was amazing! i really hope you´ll write more for this fandom for i like your approach of Lilly´s character. it´s actually the only thing in the movie i couldn´t stand: first, she lets herself get seduced (quite easily, if you ask me, i mean, some jewels+a dress? that´s all it takes to make her forget everything?!)but then she betrays darkness (by flirting quite shamelessly for such a supposedly innocent creature!)seems she doesn´t know what she wants - innocent light or sinful darkness