aww, how sad ;__; although I don't really understand the situation (because I haven;t read the manga) It had a nice story line, very dramatic ;__;

It's good, but the storyline is a little unclear and hard to catch. I still think I get it though, so GOOD FOR YOU! :D
Do make a sequel.:D

FIRST LaviLena fic? I love how the characters aren't much OOC and how you show their emotions clearly. (i'm sure this is hard for Lavi too ;_;) The idea of Lavi leaving his coat behind was so sweet. Overall, this fic is pure WIN. Keep writing, we all love you~ XD