Love it! Strong Bella, the fight, and pantless Jacob...hm ;)

I totally agree that Carlisle was OOC in BD. I don't think people hate Bella's pregnacy. I believe that we hate the way it happened in BD. It left a bad taste in the mouth! I'm liking yours! Thank you and good job.

It's about time that Bella yelled back. I really like the way this story goes. Thank you.

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This has been an awesome story and I can't wait to read the sequel. One of my favourite parts of this chapter is Bella sending Edward after the newborns instead of allowing him to stay with her. I loved Eclipse, but Bella keeping Edward by her side during the battle while his family fought for her, didn't make sense to me. I look forward to reading more of your work,

I am really enjoying your story. I like the way both Bella and Edward are handling things. Edward has learned from his mistakes, and is not being controlling. Bella is standing up for herself and is not allowing Jacob to manipulate her.

i have to agree with your AN at the bottom of this chapter -- this is one of my favorite lemon scenes as well! it's not crazy graphic or over the top but there is something very real and very sweet about it and i thought it was great. :) Thanks for always putting out great work.

I always thought Bella should have been angrier with Edward than Meyers wrote it. I know if it had been my I would have been giving some serious thought to breaking legs or something!

That was funny.
I am enjoying the story, but it is hard to read with the errors.

This chapter crack me up!! Great Humor

Without reading ahead, I predict that there is going to be a shotgun wedding!

Well, I'm not mad that she's pregnant. I really like the story.

re-reading this . . . and I love your Edward as a teenage boy. I always thought that, too, that he should be more, um, subject to his 17 year old body! Lovely Lemon.

OMG, OMG, OMG... Just read everything in two days and I loved it... The ending there holy shit... Off to read the sequel...

JENNIFER

LOVED IT..