Well that certainly got my interest! Not sure where it's going or how it will link up with Legolas and Eldarion, but that's the point really, isn't it? Looking forward to the next chapter to see where you go with it. #

(Just a small note- hope you don't mind but the few spelling errors and apostrophes got in the way occasionally. eg: eternity, and it's instead of its. )

I liked it! it seems a little much but please update soon i want to see what happen... btw who is the main character if it is the she-elf person i must say that she is kinda a mary sue so you might want to watch out for that...

0.0 Wow, I so LOVE the first chapter. :)