Wow, I really enjoyed this fanfiction as a whole!

Not only the well thought out and ingenious I might add plot, but also the fact that Doofenshmirtz was the Seme. So many people write him as a uke and while this is ok, I personally prefer his character written quite the opposite. For that matter you wrote him as being just the way he would be as seme; perfectly IC and really hot for that matter. :D

Very brilliant work!

I think your fic just killed me xD I loved it too much for my own good. THANK YOU. It's lovely, it's crazy, and what more do I have to say?
Any of the haters out there, well, ignore them :P You know a lot of people have issues, but you're fine <3

You let me so panic and so happy when I finished to read this chapter!! (I just barely know you fic, but its great!!) LUV THE HEINZ PERRY! I cant just wait for you to update xDD!! Its gonna be great :D THANKS FOR KEEPING WRITING!!

about what you said at the begining of this chapter, people are supid, i mean they put the M rate in for a reason and that reason is because not everything is pretty pretty kiddy kiddy. And as much as i hate being caught reading a guyXguy Rated M i love your story to the end of the earth. People need to grow up, you are a great writer even if you're stories aren't kid approved. Look at art, most of the greatest pieces of art are of the human body bare raw and exposed. and that what your story is bare raw exposed Fucking awesome art, and it's perfect at it's current rating and structure. if there wasn't meant to be stories like this than the M rating wouldn't be there. You chose to wrote this story and i think it rocks as is. So to the person who wrote you that letter, Go fuck yourself and get over it, don't like it don't read it. Oh and if the person who did write that letter is reading this, why are you reading this story if all you are doing is complaining?
So... thank you NarutoBlackmail for creating a new perspective on the two characters, you've changed my view about the show, and opened my eyes to new posibilties about these minor, (now main) characters and it's wonderful.

We~

Sorry if my reviews get later and later. My ipod touch was stolen and thats what i ussualy read my fanfics on.

Anyway, awesome chapter! Just rebel against the haters! They don't know what they are missing. XD

Lol, sexual tension is gone.

Oh nuu, Peter the Panda! What happened? We wont know till the next chapter is out! Can't wait! :D

Excuse me while I go change my underwear...THIS WAS TOO EPIC! God I'm going to be drawing like crazy for this chapter.

oh dear, poor peter! things just get worse and worse for him, huh? I LOVED this chapter! please update as soon as you can(or want)!

Now that was a let down. You had an uber amazing sex scene and then ended with such a depressing picture. I enjoyed it but still...

Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next!

Oh no, doctor Allen's beat up Peter!

I loved that lemon by the way.

Looks like this story is only getting started.

OMG this story is so awesome. :P Keep it up!

oh my your lemon was so hot and romantic my favorite part was when perry admited that he loves Heinz, but what happened to Peter poor him

i like your fic, please continue!

I gotta say, this is my favorite PerryXDoof fic right now. Totally great job, and I am excited for the next chapter!

I don't really have anything constructive to say, I'm not very good at writing so...keep up the good work! XD

~KK

Next chapter please! I'm loving this fic!