Loved it! I liked that last line, "But finally the pain is too much and you ebb away slowly, slipping into the darkness, and everything is black." It was a great description of what Sam must've felt like when he lost consciousness, also I really liked how you included his feelings about not understanding WHY he was fighting in this war in the first place. REALLY, REALLY good, the story's fantastic, grammar's perfect, and I understand it's just a drabble, but if for some reason you're bored, and just in the mood... a chapter two about his meeting with Optimus and when he woke up would be awesome! :]

Loved it! Great job!

Lauren

You know, it's interesting, but I haven't really seen many fics describing Sam's POV when he died. Very, Very nice.

Loved it! :) Great job! I know it's only a drabble but I'd love to see a follow up :)

Not many people use second person perspective, since it is so difficult to execute effectively. This is one case where it worked very well indeed. Brava!

This was...terrific! I've loved Transformers since the begining and this just made it all the better. Great job!