this was a greAT read hope u update soon!
i think five years was 2 long u should have
made it 2 years!

Here's a cool name (for me)
Rikimaru

Can't believe it's been five years since that whole mess started. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks for updating, but I think you are taking it a bit too far with Robin's name calling.

OMG that was pretty cool, i like the story! i've always liked luffy and robin but sadly no one really writes about them! the other stories about are from so long ago that the people probably forgot that its there. but you wont let me down would you? keep writing sin ce i love the story so much plz! i dont really like the fact about the spelling though, but if you dont go too wild then its alright!

sorry about not logging in! to lazy :p

Please update soon.

Interesting. Please do continue.

For future, I think his name is Brook, not Brooks. This one was a pretty nice little short, and hope there is more of it to come.

Just a few small tips here. Some of the crew's names are not capitalized in places, especially near the beginning and end.

A bit hard to make sense of on some spots, but I personally got the gist of what was happening, though some others might not.

Spelling and grammar in some spots. 'U know lyk...' type of stuff can be a turn off to some readers. And apostrophes and stuff should be in the right spots, like in I'll.

All that said, a nice story overall. Will be better if you get a Beta or something like that. I would offer my services in that area, if you would so desire. Nice Luffy x Robin story to start.

Yes! That was great!! Cant wait for you to update, but can you consider making the chapters a bit longer?!?!?!

Great story so far!! Please Update Soon!

Please update soon!