 the real vampire 3/13/12 . chapter 3I was just recommended this story and wow. Talk about intense. I loved it. The emotions in it were so incredibly raw and real. It was tough but I did really enjoy it (is that a weird thing to say, given the content?). Really good work. |
 Psycho Tangerine 7/4/10 . chapter 3That was very intense in the beginning. The last part(when they had to deal with their feelings) were pretty heavy. I got that Shane felt guilty for not getting treated as harshly as the others and that Hunter is expecting Shane to stop him if he ever turns again. |
 dejaceratops 7/30/09 . chapter 3Oh GOD that was fantastic. |
 Tempest88 7/5/09 . chapter 2This a very good story. Keep it up! |
 Dagmar Buse 7/2/09 . chapter 1Finally got around to reading this ... and I'm not really sure what to make of the chapter. Is this an exercise in how a POW might feel? A character study of Shane? What?
Cam sounds spot-on, though. |