It was an interesting story, but did you really have to do that to Bryce's mother? I get that she's young and totally unaware of what Jon does for a living, but to take her baby away while she's asleep? And what happens to her later on? I've looked at the other Gargoyle works you've written and have a select favorites, like Night Moves, Kittens, Breeding Season, etc., and Brianna's mentioned very little in the ones that mention her. Would it hurt to have an alternate story where Bryce didn't turn into what the future was written for him? Anyhow, please, write back. Peace!

Alas, some of us end up with all the talent *smirks* Orpheus was such a well thought out character. His whole family was. And Elisa saying "There will always be a guardian." without truly knowing was a nice touch