 Lendor 5/1/11 . chapter 2 The Red Dragons Order,
I don't know if this story will, but I for one hope to see some well developed OCs in this story to spice thing up a bit.
Can't wait to keep on reading. I loved your HP/PofC/LofR crossover and its prequel...I hope that this is just as good, if not better. I do like your writing style with lots of conversation and very few flashbacks.
Excellent work
- Lendor |
 jess.sree 9/15/10 . chapter 7Does this story stand along by itself? I thought there are 2 prequels. This story does not really follow the plot from the previous story (ies)... |
 frizzie123 8/7/10 . chapter 14what does thelatin mean? the 'Draco Dormiens Nunquam Titillandus' mean?
good series so far, can't wait for more! plz finish the 4th, i want to read the whole thing! |
 loretta537 3/28/10 . chapter 14this was a good story |
 Magicly Insane 1/1/10 . chapter 14Well this is certainly an interesting twist! On to the next saga! |
 Ptronille 8/2/09 . chapter 6Hum... Elemental ? Already ? I thought his powers had been blocked ? Or are they coming back ? D
Anyway, it's strange having to read Harry from the outside after forty-something chapters of being inside his head. But I guess that will change after the voice comes back, right ? :P
Well, see you ! |
 Ptronille 8/2/09 . chapter 1Hi !
I read the two prequels in two days and only just began the saga. Very, very, very nice, I must say. Harry is a total badass, and that's how I like it. I just hope he won't stay too long cut off from his powers ?
However there are a few incoherences (regarding this chapter in light of the prequels) :
- Harry already knows Draco is a Death Eater
- Harry learned Healing through books (Madam Pomfrey's lessons were just for show)
- How can he do magic in the house ? He's not seventeen yet, and he no longer has Rex Chase's form
Other than that, there was many attacks and many deads in this chapter. I just hope we will see Snape and Dumbledore again... And Harry takes the Dursleys' deaths rather too well...
But anyway I understand you wrote the saga before, so a few incoherences won't keep me from reading such a nice story ! )I only wanted to point them out, you know...
Does Harry still know about the leyries, vampires, ... ? About Excalibur, and everything ?
I guess I'll just find out.
See you around !
Clem |
 Lady FireMage 5/16/09 . chapter 6Hey not to complain or any thing but Some of your facts dont fit with the prequeals you wrte like harry was an elemental in 5 and 6 year. and he also didnt need his glasses but put clear glass in the to fix these things |
 Escape my reality 4/12/09 . chapter 7wait. does the ministry/ anyone else know that harry is the leader of the red dragons? |
 Escape my reality 4/12/09 . chapter 5why didn't they invite dumbleodre into the order? i mean in this fic harry doesn't hate him, he isn't dead, so why didn't he join? |
 Escape my reality 4/12/09 . chapter 3how did they get to America? |
 The Silver Flame 1/19/09 . chapter 1I like the idea of having a draco-harry team, but you should probably make draco more reluctant, snide, etc. at first, and slow his acceptance. |
 Blackdragonpi 8/13/08 . chapter 2Decent. |
 Blackdragonpi 8/13/08 . chapter 1Okay |
 Haunt of twilight 7/25/08 . chapter 14I loved the arguements they are hilarious. I look forward to reading the rest of the saga |