A beautifully written little piece from start to finish. Loved your poetic writing style and the images you created throughout, as well as the original take on events post-Aliyah. I especially liked Ziva's thoughts about Abby; and the fact that she was more worried about the effects on the team than her own pain. It's so very Ziva. Fantastic job. :)

possibly best post alliyah fic
beyond awesome

good job but did ziva tell the captors about ncis is that y she said sorry or was it something else please explain

This was awesome. Are you going to write more?

Love It.

Very good. Angsty but with just the right hint of hope from Ziva.

"They keep asking her to tell them everything she knows about NCIS, but she doesn't. She may scream as they break her bones and burn her, but she doesn't tell them a single thing. It's not even her Mossad training that keeps her from breaking; it's the fear that she could get the friends she left behind killed.

It's the fear that Tony could die thinking she hated him.

It's the fear that Tony could die, period."

Beautiful.

That was really sweet.

It was a sweet but sad and I cried when I read it