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Amber
2009-12-09 . chapter 1
This was pretty cute! I was a little disinterested at the start, but by the end of it I was smiling and laughing. The transition from smooth, orderly protocol to silly waff was VERY fluid and well done. I enjoyed this story!
Yami Chikara
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
Adorable. Seriously. Loved it.
Axie-chan
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Fun fun! I love the memos!
Lady Merlin
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
lol! This is uber cute! Loved it!
Love,
Lady Merlin
Estelle Stafford
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
I loved your setup of the story, I enjoyed reading it.
-.Jinx Friday.-
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
I have to tell you that you just made my week!!
I read this yesterday but didn't have time to review until now, because I was on a cheap laptop in a Minnesota hotel and homesick as hell. But I came on to check and see if you had anything new up that could wrench me from my misery, and you do! This is simply amazing :) Ever since I read A Matter of Perspective I've been hoping you'd write something else in this format. So be happy knowing you've gotten a smile out of your lonely-bored-and-far-from-home-on-a-Friday reader.
Loved this line, by the way: "I cannot imagine that we have 29 cases of decorations that previously belonged to members of our crew who have died. At least I hope not."
And this: "If you miss part of beta shift, I won’t report you. And since the whole ship is still scared of me, no one else will either. Convenient huh?"
ComplexNumber
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
How cute :D I liked how they were all business first, and the idea of this fic only became clear when the tone of the messages grew more personal. A nice idea to make a fic of only messages, and the last few were really sweet yet well in character. A nice job all in all! :)
MadHatterMCR
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
I didn't really find this humorous at all. But it was adorable! I loved how the messages grew increasingly lovey. Thanks for sharing!
IWantAnAlien
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
That was so sweet! You wrote all the official sounding bits so well and it was ridiculously cute when it changed to 'my jim' and 'my spock'

i'm off to go read your other stories :)
MirrorFlower and DarkWind
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
LOL so funny i loved it good job it was just perfect and funny lol i cant wait for ur next story
GermanTranslationProject
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Lol. Cute :)
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