I am an avid Alex Cross fan. I love your use of language and the insight into her final moments. Almost makes you feel sorry for her. You write with the same indepth knowlege of the great man we all strive to write like. Thank you for sharing this with this comunity! Simply beautiful!

I loved this point of view, it totally switched from what you normally read, james patteson is one of my favorite authors, and yes i am working on his work at the moment, but hey, i loved ur view on his Alez Cross series!

:) Kept me reading each word:)

Very fine work. The reader is able to enjoy the story without being persuaded either way in deeming the worthiness of the final judgement. Humanizing the character, not through pity, but through the actions we see. Actions that may otherwise be beyond the readers comprehension are given new meaning. The death, especially the last thoughts of life, hold true to this character, the dynamism of the attention-seeker, the self-delusioned, the beyond hope.

A real knack for expressing the beauty in a setting as mundane as a prison cell. The transitions, are seemless, allowing the reader to skirt along without pause, so that when the end hits you, it hits home.

I greatly approve. :D