You completely kill the story with the Abby and Zia sexual thing when the friendship storyline at the first part was a great then you just had to pull something like that . i mean really in a Gabby story is a completely turn off. and make looks Abby so Trashy. That just ruin the Gabby part so much. can you just write that stuff on a different fic. where is no in the Abby/ Gibbs fic section.

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whowza! incredibly hot. so yummy. cheercheercheer!

INTERESTING! i don't usually do femmslash, but WOW - really like how you brought this around and i can't wait to see where it goes!

Hotter than hot! Great job!

That was f*ing hot. Oh my god. I might just go take a shower.

OMG OMG OMG... that was just beyond anything... Incredible... hot, sexy... and yet also deeply emotional... :) Great work...

I like the *best friends Ziva* part... their evening was not my cup of tea, but it's getting really good now...

Hmm... it started out really well... Gibbs, his emotions, his acting, his regrets...

I wonder why Ziva is now getting involved...

I'm in utter awe. Amazing.

I loved this. What a wonderful story! I also loved Gibbs nickname for Abby, so perfect.

WOW! That was AWESOME! What a thrilling erotic scene you've written! I will read this over and over again, believe me. Great job!

Great writing. Love the anger and angst. Actually teared up when Gibbs yelled at her! You made me feel emotions. Nicely done.

Nice start. I like the premise of the story very much and I am curious to see how things will be fixed. :)

However, you should put a line at the start of the chapter alerting people about the Abby/Ziva stuff, because I, for one, would have liked to be prepared about what I could end up reading. Sorry, but femmeslash is not of my liking, no matter how ligh it is. That said, I repeat, this start was really intriguing and I hope you will update soon!