This is a great story! keep writing :)

Well written

Thanks

Aw... I'm so glad someone wrote about Paul's background! I didn't think it was fair he was just seen as a very good killer in the novel.

Well written!

your fanfic is simply wonderful. i nearly cried while reading it, especially at the part when you describe the dogs death. you are wonderful at describing details, like the water of the lake, and you make pauls character very believable. im going to read all your other stories at once!