greatttt job! i was astounded at the detail! my faves were narcissa! and all the slytherins!

Lots of character development in this chapter, as Lily finds her allegiances tested and shifting.

But, you tell yourself, you're a witch: you'll figure something out.

I love the repetition, the way each chapter starts and ends, reinforcing the overall theme.

Is that Luna's mother with the wonderful necklace of dandelions, I wonder.

Nice work with the expletives.

'Transfiguration for Beginners (even the names of the books are fascinating)' so much this :D

And the end of this chapter 'some of the magic has gone'; heartbreaking.

this was a beautiful series of chapters.

Ah-mazing! It made ame cry! Oh my gosh, that was incredible!

This was beautiful. Truly.

This is so very Lily, well done :]

A very good story. I like how you ended each chapter with "You're a witch, but. . ." Are you planning to write more?

I can just picture James putting beetles in Lilly's hair.

Excellent chapter! You captured perfectly just how Lilly would feel upon entering the wizarding world and how tramatic being called a "mudblood" could be.