|Reviews for Evans the Mudblood|
| catarina 7/11/12 . chapter 7
greatttt job! i was astounded at the detail! my faves were narcissa! and all the slytherins!
| meridian-rose 8/17/11 . chapter 4
Lots of character development in this chapter, as Lily finds her allegiances tested and shifting.
| meridian-rose 8/17/11 . chapter 3
But, you tell yourself, you're a witch: you'll figure something out.
I love the repetition, the way each chapter starts and ends, reinforcing the overall theme.
| meridian-rose 8/17/11 . chapter 2
Is that Luna's mother with the wonderful necklace of dandelions, I wonder.
Nice work with the expletives.
| meridian-rose 8/17/11 . chapter 1
'Transfiguration for Beginners (even the names of the books are fascinating)' so much this :D
And the end of this chapter 'some of the magic has gone'; heartbreaking.
| Hawk and Handsaw 9/25/09 . chapter 7
this was a beautiful series of chapters.
| Squid7000 7/21/09 . chapter 7
Ah-mazing! It made ame cry! Oh my gosh, that was incredible!
| Danwea 7/21/09 . chapter 7
This was beautiful. Truly.
This is so very Lily, well done :]
| Window Girl 7/17/09 . chapter 6
A very good story. I like how you ended each chapter with "You're a witch, but. . ." Are you planning to write more?
| Window Girl 7/17/09 . chapter 3
I can just picture James putting beetles in Lilly's hair.
| Window Girl 7/17/09 . chapter 1
Excellent chapter! You captured perfectly just how Lilly would feel upon entering the wizarding world and how tramatic being called a "mudblood" could be.