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Toadflame
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
O. M. G. I think this is the absolute best story I've ever, and I mean EVER, read, ever! Really, could you write more like this?
SnowsongIsAJaypawFan
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
What exactly happened? I'm confused.
Roz
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
Strangely enough, this has to be one of the few stories that didn't rivet me all the way through. I can't quite place why or how, but it felt like something was missing, or holding it/me back. It's actually left me qute confused as to why! Perhaps the disjointed nature, but that also adds to the suspense and tension of the story. Not knowing who is running, and themselves not remembering is clever, but it kinds made me feel suspended (once again adding to the tension) maybe it's like so much tension, not much release? Thank you for writing it and at least you appeased h plot bunnies, I know how hard they are to shake!
LilRicki
2009-07-02 . chapter 1
Oh! That was really good! Excellent suspense, and I loved how you messed with Jim's head. Thank you for sharing!

:-)
-LilRicki (aka Pansy Chubb)
Celestial Cutie
2009-07-02 . chapter 1
What an intense story! I felt my heart pumping just by reading what icy hell Kirk is going through.

I think I'm gonna get MY blankets, I'm freezing after reading this one!

Love it!
Ann Jinn
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
An exciting chase, just enough mystery as to what happened, and good ole Bones. You caught the sense of humor too. Great!
innocentmostofthetime
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Wow, that's so heavy and suspenseful! Good work! I love all of these one shots that you do.
redwingsgirl514
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Wow. 0_o Kept having to remind myself to breathe. As usual, you don't disappoint, lol.

“Bones.” He offered his friend a dopey grin. “You're Bones.”
“And you're an idiot with hypothermia. Help me get you out of those wet clothes before you damn well freeze to death.”
“Our first time in front of an audience?” He was shivering so hard he could barely move to help. “You're one kinky bastard.”

Nice comic bit to get past the panicy feeling of "what the heck happened here" while I was reading. :) If I didn't make sense with that, oh well. I am in need of caffeine. :P
Kakyd
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Another great story. I really enjoy reading your work. Thanks for writing. :o)
Alone Dreaming
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Hm! I like it. Snow and cold and darkness... sounds rather like the book I'm reading right now though they seem more worried about the gryphons than the snow. And the wraith-snow-beast thingies. It all puts me in the mood to right another dark, dark story.

Or that could be the sangria and being surrounded by my countless and very odd relatives. Huzzah for family reunions. :)

Anyway, well-written, intense, story. I enjoyed the imagery (though it's quite hot here right now-- the kind of hot reserved for bathtubs and hottubs and saunas and the like) and was happy Jim got to safety in the end. And that's right, Jim. It's Bones. The only man in the world who would put up with your shenanigans. Spock would eventually logic out that you are far more trouble than you are worth. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter of Plant Life. I'm watching the counter at teh top of the screen and I want to reach nine thousand characters exactly. So, I hope the weather is pleasant where you are! :)
It'sTimeToDance
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
This is really good. I love the suspense, and the ending. Good job :)
Sedri
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Very nice! Very creepy and clever and such a nice change from the vast majority of fanfics around. I admit, I'm quite eager to know more details, but this fic is perfectly complete as it is now.

Lovely. Thanks you. :)
Kadasa-Mori
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Oh my god... this totally destroyed my mental thought process... incredible story! I can't even piece words together to tell you how awesome it was!
JO
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
wow, this was really spooky and intense - creepy atmosphere created! keeps you reading until the last line - you simply can't stop ... a great read! Big thanks for writing it!
prettylittlepickle
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
very very good! great story!
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