 Hannah554 2009-06-28 . chapter 1This is really great, definitely worth the wait.
I love what the flowers represented, those amazing moments that don't come along very often but shouldn't be missed. I loved how you tied that into the story. John putting the blanket around Elizabeth was probably my favorite part, a small thing, I know but it was just very... John.
Everyone's reactions were great, Ronon hitting Rodney and getting chastised by Teyla was great. You write their characters perfectly.
Hannah |