 Lilyrose 2009-10-03 . chapter 24 Awesome Awesome!! Great update Red!! Really Looking forward to Were this story goes!! |
 SignedSealedWritten 2009-10-03 . chapter 24I love the way that you continued it, Red! This chapter was amazing, I love how Hotch was able to take control even while he was doubting himself. Everyone was really in character, and I loved the interaction between the Unsubs. |
 sparkletasia 2009-08-22 . chapter 21Great updates! I loved them both. Garcia and the leeches was so funny! And as much as the idea of G/K makes me want to hurl, I loved the gaming after the proposal, it cracked me up. That and Morgan in his jammies. Yum. Good job guys! |
 Sue1313 2009-08-17 . chapter 21This is so good. I just keep expecting them to grab him. I am so glad that the team is there with him. |
 Sue1313 2009-08-10 . chapter 20I am so glad that at least they are getting in some fun before they find out what is happening. |
 Sue1313 2009-07-24 . chapter 19Poor guys, even in the middle of the woods they learn of a case. You have them so in character. |
 emzypemzy 2009-07-24 . chapter 19Oh, looking forward to more, this is really great! Love the team loveage!! :) |
 Sue1313 2009-07-19 . chapter 18I did not see this coming. I am so glad that she is alive. I just hope that Hotch and the team can save both her and himself from these crazy brothers. |
 Sue1313 2009-07-13 . chapter 17Vacation will soon be over. If only Emily had not run into that guy and dropped her badge. i wonder who he is greeting at the bar? This is really good. |
 Sue1313 2009-07-13 . chapter 16I love that they are getting to have fun and just playing. This is what they have been needing. |
 Sue1313 2009-07-11 . chapter 15I love how the girls are betting on the guys. Poor Reid, none of the girls thought he would get the tent up. I bet he is the first on the list to get hurt. You just know he will. |
 emzypemzy 2009-07-11 . chapter 14Great chapter! But jeez, they go on holiday and murder follows :( Oh wells, that means more awesome team action with Garcia in the field! Yay! Looking forward to wherever this is going :) |
 Sue1313 2009-07-10 . chapter 14That twin is the killer. Now Hotch will have to prove it. It doesn't matter where JJ takes them they are going to find unsubs. |
 emzypemzy 2009-07-10 . chapter 13That is a fantastic story, I really like it, and you are all such good writers! Looking forward to more :) |
 jevans47403 2009-07-10 . chapter 13hope they get the unsub off the plane. Loved Rossi's line at the end and what he said is so true, lol. Can't wait for more!
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Hotchner was surprised by Rossi's restraint. He looked at Rossi and smiled a little, and said softly "Actually, I was trying to get her to give up what JJ's plans are for us when we get to our destination, but she was surprisingly resistant to my charms." Rossi laughed at his comment, but knew he was still deflecting the truth.
"That's because she's been OD'ing on Morgan's charms this trip," Rossi replied. Both men smiled at that. They engaged in light banter, but Hotchner continued to glance over at the man in front of him from time to time, impatiently awaiting more information about him from Garcia. |