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N'kala
2009-11-02 . chapter 18
Brilliant! I do hope you continue with the Triwizard Tournament! I love how you've rearranged this universe! :)
Papa Thom
2009-11-02 . chapter 18
Hello and again I am very pleased to have the honor of reading another tale from your imagination.

I like the changes that you made and didn't feel that they pushed the envelope to much.

I do like the idea of the ear rings. I am sure that they will be all the rage next year at Hogwarts.

I look forward to finding out what is happening in Luna's life. I know that there isn't any mention about it in the story but what is going to happen with Draco's mother and sister, the rat knew they were at the manor and I am sure that info will make it back to Malfoy eventually. I am also interested to see what Serverus and the boys come up with to combat the darkmark... if Voldy makes it back it will darken and I don't want dad to suffer... the three, with Ganger's help (any maybe Luna's special outlook) will come up with a way to turn the darkmark from a liability to an asset in the fight.

I also would like to hope that word get to France that Sirius is innocent and that he might be able to met up with his sister in exile and his new niece and play a part in their lives... exile loves company.

Keep up the great work and many best wishes in your future endeavors.

Papa Thom
San Diego CA
Melverne
2009-10-28 . chapter 18
Sadly one more of the stories I track has came to an end. I am going to have to start searching for another great story to read. I hope you eventually return to the AU that has been brilliantly developed.

-Melverne
mworth1019
2009-10-26 . chapter 18
NO, It cant be over!! Please write a sequel, someone find a bunny to bit you with... I like this story. you are a good writer
Robert
2009-10-26 . chapter 18
Thank you for the journey! It would be wonderful if you were to find some time to continue this story, but if the journey ends here, then it has been an absolute pleasure.

Good luck and best wishes with your future endeavors.
Lientjuhh
2009-10-26 . chapter 18
I love it.. Well done.. :)
LittleMrsAdams
2009-10-26 . chapter 18
good ending :) the last part made me laugh :)
Ginnylove9990
2009-10-26 . chapter 18
Graet chapter. But to be truthful. No I can't get enough of your stories. Vows and this one is great and I am hopping you do one for GOF soon. Damn I think you should have gotten over a 10 reviews for this story. Please keep up the great work.
Griffin Raven
2009-10-26 . chapter 18
Arr...sniff...sniff...I'm so sad that this worthy sequel to the brilliant story "Vows" is now completed! I do hope that at some point your might write another story about Severus and his two sons Harry and Draco, as I've absolutely loved both stories. I bet both boys would undoubtably have trouble staying out of trouble throughout the long summer, hehe! I can't help wondering what training Severus would put the boys through? Great idea with the portkey "earing" - its certainly novel and not the usual item used in stories as portkeys such as necklaces or rings.
dustyashes2004
2009-10-26 . chapter 18
please, please do a story for all seven books. i absolutely love you writing. i check my email eveyday for a new chapter.
Slytherin Head
2009-10-25 . chapter 18
AW! No, not the end! lol. Great story. I loved it. Too bad that Peter got away, that rat. Shall be looking forward to the next series!
Silverstargirl
2009-10-25 . chapter 18
I'm glad that everything turned out so well for everyone. I'm sad that there will be a wait for more of this lovely saga, but I suppose I will just have to be patient. I wish you luck with your new project.

Great chapter, fabulous story!
PM to AM and also FM
2009-10-25 . chapter 18
Wow... that was short. Well, shorter compared to Vows. I'd hoped for a little more change in the ending from canon. And I'd hoped for more Lupin exchanges as well. Both alright, and somewhat disappointing to my expectations, but it is how you write it that matters. Just hope for more Lupin sightings next story.
SituationalExtrovert
2009-10-25 . chapter 18
Re: both VOWS & DUTY

Well done! I enjoyed both stories VERY much, and I am eagerly anticipating your return from your mentioned break. I want to see how your version of events turns out, if only because it seems as though YOU will let Severus live, as opposed to Rowling's egregious treatment of him.

I like your little world!!

Have a nice hiatus, but please...don't make it too long!!
karlii
2009-10-25 . chapter 18
Good wrap up! You did a good job bringing it all together.. maintaining the integrity of your story and canon at the same time. Great job!
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