 Von 2009-11-19 . chapter 4I love this! The story from Bee's perspective is not only fascinating and allows new ideas to be given but somehow it makes the story more exciting than the original!
Above and beyond awesome! |
 staidwaters 2009-11-04 . chapter 4Oh, cliffy! I really am enjoying your take on the movie. I usually don't read "rewrites" but you're adding in a lot of unique, fascinating details. Thanks for the read. |
 The Dandelion Girl 2009-10-27 . chapter 4Looking forward to seeing what extra scenes you will be adding in future chapters... keep up the good work! |
 Rana 2009-10-25 . chapter 4 When are you going to update? The movie's out now, so... I just really want to read more! |
 Soului 2009-10-12 . chapter 4Ahh, cliffhanger!
Oh well. Great job and I can't wait to see the next chapter. It's really interesting seeing the events of the movie from Bee's perspective. |
 FateAndFaith 2009-09-21 . chapter 1Wow. Just, wow.
Bumblebee is above and beyond my favorite character. As such, I think I'm pretty picky when it comes to fanfics centered around him and/or told from his point of view.
Yours, frankly, are epic.
You've put a unique take on this movie, going beyond just giving reactions to things the filmmakers came up with, but adding so much more that just makes this an amazing read--the prologue, for example. It's unique and interesting and I cannot freaking wait for more. |
 Seriously Yours 2009-09-09 . chapter 4I really hope you continue with this fic. It's very well written and immensely enjoyable. You've characterized Bumblebee perfectly! |
 Dragoon-Yue 2009-09-01 . chapter 4So far, so good; to bad they hadn't hired you to do the novelization... Ah well. Anyway, I hope you post the next chapter soon.
And, yeah, you're right; Leo IS annoying, though he does have some humorous scenes in the movie. |
 demyxFAN 2009-08-23 . chapter 4THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC
I love how it's all in Bumblebee's perspective, if this keeps up I can't WAIT for the battle in Egypt. |
 mystice 2009-08-22 . chapter 4 I am amused with this story :) I also enjoyed the 'as told in a song' story, as it gave me a POV of Bumblebee during the transformers film. I feel bad for him, though. He can't readily communicate his thoughts and warnings to Sam. But his manner of expressing himself through choice soundbytes were cool and funny! Haha, I am totally in to this :) Anyway, at least you were able to make sense of the shortcomings / inconsistencies of the film. Please do continue writing this, I enjoyed watching ROTF though i found the ending way too rushed. I'm looking forward to reading on more of this (through bumblebee's perspective) of course :) |
 Teldra 2009-08-15 . chapter 4More please :) |
 Ouchimoo 2009-08-15 . chapter 3I hope you update soon. You're leaving me in agony on what's going to happen next! |
 ThatOneFan 2009-08-05 . chapter 4O the plot thickens... I absolutely LOVE your movies-from-Bee's-view. Your filling a lot of plot holes from the movie, AND giving Bee screen time! Good on you!!
Is it bad that I'm So looking forward to the OMFG-SAM-JUST-DIED part? Poor Bee!!
Also i am in love with action-reaction fics as much as i am alt-pov fics. Your story got me thinking. How would the Aoutobots react to everything the humans did without them there? I mean most of the 'Bot team didn't show up until like half-way through the first movie. and none of the 'bots know what happened in sector-7's base.(can't you see Ironhide applauding Lennox's 'no your gonna count to 3' stunt?)
Seriously though Bee's POV is great! Get to Sam's Death soon!
~T1F~ |
 Toki1 2009-07-23 . chapter 4Love this! Poor Bee though. Getting ignored, chastised all the time XD He's so adorable and honorable. <3 cant wait to read more! |
 Toki1 2009-07-23 . chapter 3This is really awesome. These are all the parts I miss reading in the books and the movie T_T BB is the best part. |