 Silver Winged Firefly 2009-12-07 . chapter 6Oh my, please update this story is too cute and really quite enjoyable! |
 Concubine99 2009-11-22 . chapter 6aww, cute! ^^ |
 XXSkittlesXX 2009-11-18 . chapter 6I adore this story |
 betweenlife 2009-11-06 . chapter 6This is cute. I am loving the twins! More for sure! :) |
 lillybean queen of the i ocean 2009-10-07 . chapter 6love |
 Sue1313 2009-10-03 . chapter 6This was good. I am sorry that Reid fell from grace in Clark's eyes. It is hard not to be a hero after you have been. I look forward to more. |
 Parzival 2009-10-03 . chapter 6Hilarious! Nervous Spencer, trying to avoid the inevitable, but Derek not getting his hints, and then Spencer’s all worried Clark won’t talk to him anymore, LOL. Clark was a little bit annoying in this chapter, but Bruce balanced this off by being extra cute. Maybe it’s a good thing that Clark found out about Spencer’s ‘betrayal’ the evening they were supposed to spend with Garcia anyway. Hopefully Clark will be more social again the next morning, when the boys have survived Garcia’s colorful, girly sheets. Meanwhile Spencer and Derek can enjoy some quality time together where Derek can receive his ‘punishment’ for the priceless fanboy comment. I’m not sure, if I like the confinement of Spencer’s ‘Science Fiction paraphernalia’ to just one room in his own apartment, though, but obviously at least the poster in the living room escaped Derek’s wrath, LOL, and love’s worth some sacrifices. I wish I could be a fly on the wall when Spencer has to explain the flamewars to Derek. Looking forward to your next update. |
 Deathandallherfriends 2009-10-03 . chapter 6I loved this. The whole Star Trekk vs. Star Wars thing was amusing. Update soon please. =) |
 KimOfDrac 2009-10-01 . chapter 6YAY I have longed for more of this :) |
 Reine Sumabat 2009-09-30 . chapter 5OMG! I luv this story and the other one that u did, "The Guest"! So funny & CUTE!! Hurry & write somemore! ;D |
 laberinto 2009-09-23 . chapter 5honestly, i could not stop giggling through the whole thing, the interactions are hysterical and i love the twins...absolutely amazing, cannot wait to read more! |
 xxpinkwritesx 2009-09-22 . chapter 5:D MOAR! I do so love the nerdiness. |
 BRM 2009-09-20 . chapter 5I love it hmygod they are so cute! ~tackle hgs!! kisses!~ please update soon! |
 Wilting Rose 08 2009-09-17 . chapter 5This story, and the one before it, are uber cute! They make me want to squee quite loudly, which wouldn't be a very good idea, because it's 1 in the morning, and I have two sleeping roommates across the hall and a sleeping friend on the couch. lol.
I absolutely love this story, and can't wait for it to be updated! |
 Dysgrammatophobia 2009-09-17 . chapter 5Nice chapter. I love the interaction between Garcia and the twins. Anyway, you only had a few spelling/grammar errors in this chapter and the last one. I notice you use "bar-b-que" instead of "barbecue." You also use "then" instead of "than." While then is used most of the time, than is used in comparisons such as "more of this than that," "rather this than that," etc. When you use word like more, less, rather, better, and other words that fall under the same category you're going to use than in the phrase instead of then. That's how I tell myself when to use it anyway. Just thought it would help. Thanks for sharing. I can't wait to see what happens next. |