Awww tension between England and America Is there a sequel to this?

England is out a character throughout the fic but I understand that it is your first so I'll be gentle. Scotland was also slightly out of character but you didn't know how he looked or acted so that's ok. For future reference his design(not official yet but still wildly popular) is a red-haired, slightly small in muscles(no more then England) and slightly taller then America. He is foul-tempered and is always smoking a cigar or cigarette(although my adoptive parents who are Scottish will tell you that they have never met a Scot who smoked a cigarette if they had a choice). I'm sure if you look him up on YouTube you could find some great pictures! He also is England's older brother but the marriage thing worked as well.

Here are links to two good pictures I found on :

fs70/f/2011/222/a/f/_scotland_by_

fs71/i/2012/080/0/d/scotland_wallpaper_by_

i liked it! but i do have a couple comments. :D (no pain or offense intended)

to be entirely correct scotland and england didn't enter into a political union (marriage lol) until 1707 (may 1st to be exact) and together with wales and northern ireland they formed what is known as the united kingdom of britain and northern ireland, though each country remains independent.

hehe I like the Scotland OC! Maybe its coz I'm scottish but still

Hahahaha that's pretty hilarious

okay let me get this straight...england is not only shagging america but also scotland...
i mean it would be okay when scotland were aware of the fact that his husband is going to shag his colonie but like this...
its kinda degrading for all nations...
for scotland cause he has a husband who commits adultery...for america cause he is content with much less then he deserves...and for england cause he is a spinless piece of shit that does not deserve any of them...

Oh, whoa! Axis Powers!

:D

You surprise me. I love it.

This was hilarious. You captured Scotland's personality quite well, I think.

*dance*

I thought it was cute. I think the addition of Scotland was a good idea, and England talking about him being a "Real man" was pretty interesting ;) America's reaction to Scotland was pretty much what I'd expect from Alfred as well.

There were a few typos here and there, but otherwise it was great!

wait a minute isn't scotland techniqually still married to england? oh well who cares either way Scotland is wearing a skirt XD I refuse to call it a kilt its a man skirt.

Thats so cool Really, good Idea!

I'd love to read more of this