 AiedailWing 2009-07-20 . chapter 1Great but also cute! I particularly love (reading again and again) the part where Maedhros muttered to himself about how his baby brothers were still innocents despite all. I had to restrain myself from laughing out loud (because my little brother was nearby and I didn't want to be asked why I llaughed) when Maedhros described about the pranks; quite original! Well, except for the bedsheets...
You had quite a clear characterisation for the three brothers. Their interaction was quite natural and realistic as well, and somehow you managed to depict a rather clear picture of their past in Valinor within such mall and scattered parts in the piece. There was an issue of punctuations and the nonexistence of separation between the letter and the last paragraph, but overall this one-shot was great. :) I love it.
- Rey |
 perelleth 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Witty tale. Maedhros did have a trying time once he is back into business. But the reasoning makes sense.
Good to see your muses back. |
 lokimademedoit 2009-07-04 . chapter 1ahh this is good.
I have to say short-sheeting beds is funny, Im grown up now and still find it funny, there is no hope for me haha
Maedhros will always have my sympathies for writing left-handed. It really doesnt work well with ink. Sigh. |
 Calvusfelix 2009-06-30 . chapter 1Wow! And they say Curifin got all of his dad's wits - I like the way you had put the things in place. Nice to see you writing again, about the Feanorans that is... |
 HaloFin17 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Loved this one! It had great brotherly interaction, and sound reasoning from Maedhros, both publicly to the twins and in private. It only makes sense both ways.
Great job!
Halo |