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AiedailWing
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
Great but also cute! I particularly love (reading again and again) the part where Maedhros muttered to himself about how his baby brothers were still innocents despite all. I had to restrain myself from laughing out loud (because my little brother was nearby and I didn't want to be asked why I llaughed) when Maedhros described about the pranks; quite original! Well, except for the bedsheets...

You had quite a clear characterisation for the three brothers. Their interaction was quite natural and realistic as well, and somehow you managed to depict a rather clear picture of their past in Valinor within such mall and scattered parts in the piece. There was an issue of punctuations and the nonexistence of separation between the letter and the last paragraph, but overall this one-shot was great. :) I love it.

- Rey
perelleth
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Witty tale. Maedhros did have a trying time once he is back into business. But the reasoning makes sense.

Good to see your muses back.
lokimademedoit
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
ahh this is good.

I have to say short-sheeting beds is funny, Im grown up now and still find it funny, there is no hope for me haha

Maedhros will always have my sympathies for writing left-handed. It really doesnt work well with ink. Sigh.
Calvusfelix
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Wow! And they say Curifin got all of his dad's wits - I like the way you had put the things in place. Nice to see you writing again, about the Feanorans that is...
HaloFin17
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Loved this one! It had great brotherly interaction, and sound reasoning from Maedhros, both publicly to the twins and in private. It only makes sense both ways.

Great job!
Halo
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