That was really good, I liked the descriptions, it gave me a clear thought as to what he looked like and his attitude towards some things around him.

This was absolutely beautiful. The descriptions were brilliant. I could picture everything (especially a half-dressed Zechs, wink-wink)in my mind very clearly. I love the little teaser about Zechs' eyes looking alive. Hmm...wonder why.... I love this and I'm very glad you were able to break through your writer's block. Beautiful work!