Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Search
Reviews for: My Secret - Page 1 of 6
hobo 4/17/12 . chapter 6
Gah! I know I'm being greedy but, I want MORE Dx
Aka Chibi-chan 2/5/12 . chapter 6
Aww that was so cute! I wonder if Nanoha thinks Fate is a stalker. Hmm?... Nah!

I love this fic! Please continue it! I really really really want to read more! I beg you! Please continue it! I hope to see more soon!
Aka Chibi-chan 2/5/12 . chapter 5
Ah so the king is Jail? I'm so confused but I think everything will make sense later one. Neither way Yuuno or Jail, I hate them both. Anyways I can't wait see what Fate will do not the she found Nanoha. So exciting!
Aka Chibi-chan 2/5/12 . chapter 4
Oh wow nice poll! Ou now I really have to read the story! It's soo good!
Aka Chibi-chan 2/5/12 . chapter 3
Oh I see Fate dreamt about Momoka that's why Fate thought Nanoha was her mother! Ah-ha! I get it now! Wait then who's Fates real mother? And you say Yuuno is the king? Wow what a shocker! No wonder I hate the king from the beginning. I can't wait to find out more about this whole situation!
Aka Chibi-chan 2/5/12 . chapter 2
Ou this story is so exciting! It's soo good! I wish could see how Fate looks like. I got an image but it keeps fading a away. I see Precia is a good Mother in this story. I love fics with good and kind Precia anyways I can't wait to read more!
Aka Chibi-chan 2/5/12 . chapter 1
Ou this is the beginning of something good i see. I can sense it. Can't wait to read more!
Jen 3/27/11 . chapter 6
i like your story. will you continue with it soon?
kari2 2/5/11 . chapter 6
please continue the story please
Zona Rose 12/22/10 . chapter 6
Nice twist to this plot. I like it. I look foreword the more chapters to this fic/story.
Blackflyerzee 11/8/10 . chapter 6
New Reader

this is really interesting! so much things i want to know!

its sooo twisted i cant think wats going to happen next XD

i want Nanoha and Fate together NOW! XD

Cant w8 for the next chapter!
Yuri Lover 6/2/10 . chapter 6
I enjoooooooooooy your story to the fullest and I hope you

bring more surprises into this story.

That said I would like to ask where you want to (let)Yunno(suffer) in your story?

I wish you would upload more often! Ganbaro Yuki-Chan
King2010 5/23/10 . chapter 6
I'am enjoying this one quite a bit. Honestly speaking, it's pretty interesting to have one of those "royal family" settings.

This chapter had me wondering on how Nanoha will treat Fate from this point forward... You'd think it weird that someone you met one time at the park, suddenly transfers to your school and knows everything about you. Just saying.

Keep up the good work.
ChloeGemma 3/15/10 . chapter 6
Wow! What a story, i'm so hooked! The description you go into for each character, scene, and event is amazing, which is great for the reader when trying to imagine the scenes in our head :) You are a talented writer, _ so thank-you for writing a story which was very enjoyable to read :P Eagerly awating the next chapters for this, so update soon whenever is possible for you :D Anyways thanks again :) x
xXKoketsUXx 1/14/10 . chapter 6
*grins* It's so real! Beautiful. Just beautiful "attacked" i found that really amusing...

Kira
76 found: Page 1 2 3 4 .. 6 Next »
Return to Top