Wow you're really good MPanda. I assumed you were, but I didn't know the extent of how good. This one-shot was very emotional, very well-written, and certainly interesting. I like it a lot. Good job. :D

The end of the leaf, of the squads, of all hope for another tomorrow.. I can see it, but then that face with confident eyes and blonde hair perks up and runs, to somewhere to begin again, perhaps with sakura in tow? its just an idea, something to play with. A depressingly awesome story.

I was wondering if you can sasuke's point of view to what happened and maybe kakashi's. The writing is great by the way

nice story line..

cool elaboration..