I love the group's unique dynamic. I think what make's this story standout is how the characters interact with each other. Love it as always.

Amazing fic! Your characterization is excellent, and I especially love what you did with Crono--you really bring out his personality while keeping him plausibly silent. The interactions between the characters are great, as is Lucca's narrative voice. The one thing that throws me out of the story is the modern curses from the new characters; it doesn't really fit the tone of the game or the dialogue of the canon characters. That aside, I can't wait to read the rest of the fic (and apparently this is part of a series?)!

Oh man, this chapter made me remember that I LOVE your adventure chapters. While I don't mind the exposition, I can tell that 95% of it is really only foreshadowing to other Phoenix Chronicles stories, so it's nice to have parts that I can actually understand now. *shot*

Having everyone end up in the submarine made me giddy. I could just HEAR Chrono's Theme come up as everyone got prepared and entered the murky deep, and now I can't get it out of my head, thank you very much.

But regardless, I am really happy to see some awesome wanton destruction and new things happening. I can't wait for the next part, so take your time and make it great!

Also "If all other variables in our lives had been reversed, I believe Crono would've made an either astoundingly great or astoundingly terrible villain."

OSHI FORESHADOWING? *shot* I dunno, I'm just kind of afraid. I don't want Lucca becoming a bad guy and having to get killed. I really enjoy her D= It's just like this deconstructionist movie about Hamlet through the eyes of the bit players Rozencrantz and Gildenstern. Through the entire movie, you fall in love with these two goofballs as they try and figure out just what's going on, and you KNOW they're going to die at the end just like in the play, but you don't WANT them to because they're awesome.

I have a feeling something like that is going to happen here, and it makes me sad D=

REGARDLESS, I loved this and can't wait for more~
-Charlett~

Poor Lucca. Great chapter, I like this added dimension in Crono and Lucca's relationship. And of course I'm thrilled the Frog is human again. Keep up the good work.

You just made my day! He's human again! The beast talent thread was a lot of fun, especially Magus' snarky comments about it. As always I love it. Keep it up!

FF HUMAN FROG HELL YES.

*HIGHFIVE*

Man I really liked the fact that we figured out who the mysterious person was back at the castle. OH, was that how Crono got better? SNAP that's pretty cool. I love it when people make stuff like that, it's like a mystery~!

Thanks so much for the nice read~ ilu so much, Myshu~

Much Love~
-Charlett

Loved that spider scene, and Magus' purposely late "Duck". Another great chapter.

Those black voice are starting to get a little personality. This is cool, I love the mounting mystery with both the book and whatever is going on inside Lucca.

As always, I'll love any scene with Frog in it. You've given him some awesome lines too; I love the mix between the slang and the old English. Though, I thought you went on a bit of a tangent with the whole Jerad and Crono's girlfriend thing, it was still hilarious to see it through Lucca's point of view. I can't wait to get the the next chapters!

awright Spiders. sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Work and stuff. Yay Universities.

Anyway uhm... I liked the fact that everything's kinda continuing. I liked the part where Lucca finds out a little more about Frog's predicament. Poor guy never gets a break D=

Sorry I'm sucking at this. I hope to see more soon~
-Charlett

I liked the scene with Ayla and her mentioned "carnal brawn". Her reaction to Lucca's predicament gave a little more depth to her character as a whole, I think. Another cool chapter, and I'm curious about this book Magus found in Lucca's attic.

"Thou dost not want a piece of this, I assure thee". That has to be one of the best one-liners I've ever read (it just makes me grin). I love the background banter of the party while they're playing the video game.

Its always a treat, keep up the good work!

You know, Myshu. I keep thinking that someday, SOMEDAY, you will make a story that will NOT have random sex in it just for teh lulz or whatevs, but GOD. FOR. BID.

Although I GUESS it's okay a bit but still. Jeez. SOMEDAY.

But man though, feeling sex from a ways away has got to be the WORST super power ever. Except I guess a lot of people would think it's a COOL one because free orgasms I guess.

:| This reminds me how depraved the human race is. THANKS A LOT.

Also dundundun Jerad and Lucca OTP lulz.

It's funny, my friend and I were sitting for like seven hours going "Dangit, I KNOW I've heard of Jerad before!" All we can think of Gerad. But you know, FFVI isn't too much of a stretch. You did CT with FF9, so yeah.

Also I'm rambling. Sorry.

Shame on you for constant sex. *shameshameshame* But keep up the story, regardless.
-Charlett~~

Aww, ilu Myshu. ('Tis Xyn under a new name btw.) I'm so glad to see that you're still writing for CT. I've had the story alert in my inbox and I'm JUST NOW getting a chance to read your new story. I'm only a chapter in, but so far it's really promising. You've definitely improved as a writer since those 2004 days. If you don't mind me saying so, you're less wordy, but man you make every word count. And your characterizations are spot-on, you remind why I love these characters in the first place. I'm excited for the rest of the story and I hope you keep up the good work! Once I'm done, I'll have to re-read your older stories because it's been too long!

I love this Dr. L.E.A. development. It's always refreshing to see how a story title is connected to the story itself, I just think it shows you actually thought about it and that you care. Well, keep up the good work!