I really like the idea of an alternate GT, since... well you know... GT sucked...

But when you added Broly it kinda stopped me from reading the rest of it. Not to say this isn't good, you're good at writing it out and everything but Broly was never really in the anime storyline, just the movies. Still good job and great idea of changing the GT era.

Don't let my review get you down either, it's a great work, just not something I personally agree with (Bringing Broly into the main series). Don't let my personal feelings toward that get you down or stop the story though, because otherwise, it's a great effort into a good story.

Much better. >:)