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Reviews for: Chocolate and Flowers
hklbry
2009-07-02 . chapter 1
People read this a lot differently from how I did. I didn't think cute. I thought it was kind of tragic that House still gives the power in their relationship to Wilson, continues to need him even as he logically knows it's not the right thing for him, and realizes this about himself. The greatest curse can be self-awareness!

I'm not a big fan of the second person story, but you did a good job of keeping it a length that doesn't reach the annoying boundary. As always, well done!
Daitai Otonashii Ookami
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Ah House, the woes of your brain. Really enjoyed your House. He's quite real in each story.
aliciachu
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. (:
I love, love, love your House. You had his voice pinned from the get-go, which was important considering it's not a horribly long story, but the length isn't a drawback at all. Second person was an interesting tense choice that I've seen a lot more of lately, and it really worked, for reasons I can't really explain. It works well for House.

Very cute drabble. And a very nice birthday present, if I do say so myself.
Militant Delusionalist
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Aww that was cute. :) I loved that last line!
TombeDeLaLune
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
that was lovely !
I absolutey loved the last phrase!!
so glad to see you writng :)
lillybean queen of the i ocean
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
that was good
Potterworm
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
great little story.
MadScientistGirl
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Cute! Loved it!
chaoskir
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Oh wow! I would love to read more of them. I mean the chocolate and flower House and this gentlemen-like Wilson who court House. Thanks for sharing!
micetea
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Aw sweet")
BandGeek58407
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Aw...very cute...loved it! ^_^
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