 hklbry 2009-07-02 . chapter 1People read this a lot differently from how I did. I didn't think cute. I thought it was kind of tragic that House still gives the power in their relationship to Wilson, continues to need him even as he logically knows it's not the right thing for him, and realizes this about himself. The greatest curse can be self-awareness!
I'm not a big fan of the second person story, but you did a good job of keeping it a length that doesn't reach the annoying boundary. As always, well done! |
 Daitai Otonashii Ookami 2009-06-30 . chapter 1Ah House, the woes of your brain. Really enjoyed your House. He's quite real in each story. |
 aliciachu 2009-06-30 . chapter 1Oh, wow. (:
I love, love, love your House. You had his voice pinned from the get-go, which was important considering it's not a horribly long story, but the length isn't a drawback at all. Second person was an interesting tense choice that I've seen a lot more of lately, and it really worked, for reasons I can't really explain. It works well for House.
Very cute drabble. And a very nice birthday present, if I do say so myself. |
 Militant Delusionalist 2009-06-30 . chapter 1Aww that was cute. :) I loved that last line! |
 TombeDeLaLune 2009-06-29 . chapter 1that was lovely !
I absolutey loved the last phrase!!
so glad to see you writng :) |
 lillybean queen of the i ocean 2009-06-29 . chapter 1that was good |
 Potterworm 2009-06-29 . chapter 1great little story. |
 MadScientistGirl 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Cute! Loved it! |
 chaoskir 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Oh wow! I would love to read more of them. I mean the chocolate and flower House and this gentlemen-like Wilson who court House. Thanks for sharing! |
 micetea 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Aw sweet") |
 BandGeek58407 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Aw...very cute...loved it! ^_^ |