odd story, yet interesting, keep up the good work, byes

Ah, Luna.

Excellent. I love how Luna understands his pain, and understands more about death than anyone should have to. And I see perhaps Albus can heal enough to think of people, and not always just about the Greater Good.

Brilliant.

This was beautiful. Thank you.

wow, very good story. I'm impressed with how well you did luna.

Oh, so beautiful, and so terribly sad.

This is a fantastic little story.

(Just a quick word, though, as you might not have looked at it in a while, one of the site updates disturbed some of your formating - the things you meant to be in italics, I think.)

This was really good, and while...strange...offered insight to how Albus must have felt after Ariana's death. I found Luna's line about her friends blowing up her house on purpuse amusing, if not funny.

Fantastic, beautiful, and original. I loved it.

This was absolutely amazing and I am so glad I found it! You wrote both characters so beautifully and every scene was excellent. I really like the way you wrote Albus's character, his feeling and actions seem so realistic and in character to me. Bravo!

I have about two more seconds before the battery on the laptop should be dying, so sorry for the short review. I had to sum it up into three words. Three completely lovely fitting words for your fic.
Wonderful
Tragic
Mysterious
You did a good job with the title, didnt you?

That was great. Update soon.

I have to say that I find this very very good and also bewildering. Does it make a real difference to Dumbledore? Well, it has to, I can feel that Luna would make a difference to any but the hardest heart, and Dumbledore isn't that. But I'm still terribly annoyed with D. and can't help wondering if Luna helping him with his pain would actually alter history - if he might gain a little wisdom if he wasn't so busy pretending to be wise. So, my own baggage is messing up your wonderful story.

so lovely and so heartbreaking.

Beautiful, just beautiful. Luna and Albus were both wonderfully in character and the wording was gorgeous

This was a beautiful story! I was rather surprised at how much I enjoyed reading every minute of it. I loved Luna, and I think you were quite spot on with her character. I also appreciate the overlaying theme of regret and an almost fairy tale feel to the whole thing. Very bewitching.

Folstza