|Reviews for Rise of the Vongola|
| leylinjan 5/5/13 . chapter 10
plz write more ... TTTT
| Guest 5/5/13 . chapter 8
'What I do is none of my business' - great! Love your story :)
| Guest 5/5/13 . chapter 4
love this one! your harry is just so unique and special - I find it really sad that you abandoned (?) this story! please, consider writing more... it's really refreshing to read about a clownish-optimistic Harry with a new plot - plz!
| leylinjan 5/5/13 . chapter 1
Liked it a lot :)
Some suggestions for the future in case you still read the reviews: if you make references to something (aka Harry reminded Vernon of the kids in 'Children of The Corn' ), include an adjective. I love learning about new stuff (songs, books, stories,...) while reading fanfiction and I always look the stuff up, but it is more fun if you would include something like: Harry reminded Vernon of the bloodthirsty/fanatic/murdering/horror/... kids in 'Children of The Corn'. When I read this at first, I didn't know what the Children of The Corn were - I thought that there were 2 possibilities: either that Vernon perceived Harry as a monster (because of the general mafia theme of your story and because it was stated before that Harry had the emotionless visage to annoy Vernon). However, I also thought that 'Children of The Corn' could refer to a story about poor kids who have nothing to eat but corn and live in the wilderness - aka Oliver Twist. So, to sum it up: I love references to new stories, new facts, new everything, but give a small subordinate clause and/or and adjective/adverb to explain further. :)
Otherwise - love your story. Harry's spirit is strong. I loved how he said "you could help, you know?" to :))
| Book lover 5/2/13 . chapter 1
Please update! This fanfic is one of my favorites!
| Peace-Dove969 4/14/13 . chapter 1
| Annyomus 3/28/13 . chapter 10
Keep updating! This is an amazing story!
| Silver Heart11DOOM 12/22/12 . chapter 10
| NvLgNr 9/6/12 . chapter 10
Such a good story. Why did you stop? Please continue this story.
| Hasan Saeed 8/2/12 . chapter 10
| Akuma-Heika 6/16/12 . chapter 7
Never told us Anna's hairstyle.
Nice trick using the Goblet of Fire.
I just saw the abandoned part of your summary and I was wondering about it.
PS: Remembered something I wanted to say in chapter 2 or 3 but lost my internet for the day and forgot about it when I got it back: does Astoria Daphne's younger sister exist in this?
| Akuma-Heika 6/16/12 . chapter 6
Is Harry's gun Hades from Black Cat Unlucky 13?
Are you going to continue this?
Thanks for the read!
...I think I had something else to write about but I can't remember.
| Guest 6/9/12 . chapter 10
I'm really into the story, please continue writing!
| Facebook addicted.x 6/7/12 . chapter 10
Best story I've read in a while, please update soon!
| Kingdark 5/21/12 . chapter 10
One of the better stories I've read and once again it has been abandoned. What, did you run out of inspiration again? Why bother writing a story when you don't even get to finish it?